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Really enjoyed the game and I'm looking forward to the final version. Overall a 9/10

Good things:

Great art, really enjoy the style

While kind of long at times, I did enjoy the story. It got better after getting exposed to the whole game.

Scenes are fun, and I enjoy the customization options for the models

Feels kind of like a dating sim. Haven't found too many good ones out there so this was nice.

Things I think could change or use improvement:

I feel like my choices don't matter. The only one I noticed having a mild effect on what was happening was the dialog with Maeve in the bath. It would be fantastic if this could be non-linear, and have a few different outcomes based on what you say/do, and the time you do it.


Bugs or things that seemed weird:

You could only go to the forest and get the scene with Maeve after choosing the skip option when the end of game message pops up. The scene does not save to Maeve's profile. 


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I also enjoy that you left the text file in about taking lulu's hat, and then went back on that by letting players go to her character page.