Okay not to be "that guy", but.. Gwen brags to you in the car ride to her place about how she shaved that morning and that she is "as smooth as a little girl" yet she somehow grew a small patch of hair down there in the time it took you all to eat dinner and go to her room? Also, the misgendering is pretty annoying, several times the dialog refers to women as "him" or says "his". Seriously, send me the dialog and I will proofread it, for free!