What an interesting game this was! It was so interesting how Treze and Devyan's story occurs on the periphery of a greater conflict. Parts of it feel cold, and I felt Devyan's sense of loneliness and helplessness so strongly (the lack of music and great use of atmospheric background noise really helped with this.) But there's more to it than that; Treze and Devyan have such a sweet, loving relationship, and that comes across so well in the writing, the sheer sense of warmth you can feel from the two of them together. Great work on this VN, I really enjoyed reading it!
By the way, that flickering/glitchy effect used on a certain character's text was really cool!