This is very well done. You are very talented and I can definitely see the improvements since I played, "The Shopping List." I really like the inclusion of different puzzles and horror elements (like the diving sequence.) The voice acting was a nice touch too.
Only two things I can suggest: some of the driving sequences were a bit long and I feel like they could have been cut down. The music is great but, some of it's copyrighted and I think you should mention that.
Thank you for the game! I'm looking forward to your next horror creation~