There's a bit of an issue regarding your character's last name. If you don't choose the first option with Mr. Connor, where you threaten to throw him out yourself, you don't get an option to input your last name. This means that a couple pages later, at the cafe, Amy refers to you as "Miss unknown" in the main text, and "Miss $surname" in the first option. And speaking of that first option with Mr. Connor, there's also a small error there:
Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: Unexpected token 'if'
<<if $job is "Lawyer", if $job is "R&D">> Despite not being a member of the security staff they all know that if you are around when something hits the fan it makes their job much easier as you are not afraid to get physical and are capable of laying out most people you meet if the need arises. This has earned you an unofficial position on the security team and many employees will ask you for help if they see you when something happens.<</if>>