There are sooo many good things I could say about Northern Lights, but I'll keep this brief UwU
The pacing is by far my favourite part. Writers can often get lost with making a story far too long or overly short, but I can tell by the tempo alone that xa'll have A LOT planned, so the ability to condense all the information xou want to share in a particular moment expresses xour talent for writing. Xou've compounded all the right emotions in such a fluid way that xou haven't left the tale wanting in any way <3
Xou guys have done a PHENOMENAL job with this VN~ I really couldn't ask for more. Top dog marks. Truly exceptional! ^^_