Nice!! With the level of artistry displayed in the opening cinematic, it's almost hard to believe this is your first jam!
The jumping felt a little awkward at times, but only cause you stopped dead in your tracks after a long jump. But I did really like having the two kinds of jumps.
When I started playing, I assumed that there would be a level in which you have to intentionally desynchronize the two sides to make it past a series of jumps, and I'm a little disappointed you never did that! It feels like a lost opportunity for some really clever puzzles, but oh well. Next time!
I will admit - and maybe I just don't get it - but I found the gameplay and the narrative to be a little disconnected from each other. It felt weird to go from an obvious suicide story, to a simple platformer, and then go straight back to a flatline. If the platformer section had more dark or depressing elements, it wouldn't feel so weird. But I genuinely forgot about the upsetting narrative because of how fast it seemingly went away.
Thanks for creating, I enjoyed this one.