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Hi there! What an amazing update. I love the new CGs!

Since you are asking for feedback, here are my two cents. But please feel free to ignore them if you don’t agree with them as these are purely just my opinions.

  • The list of CGs are getting long. Perhaps it might be a good idea to split them up by characters. The monsters ones maybe grouped into monsters or ??? to keep it spoiler free.
  • You mentioned in previous devlogs that you will give Chris a makeover? He looks the same as last update. Did that makeover happen already? or not yet?
  • Spoiler Antonio CG #5 It looks like he has two nipples on his left pec
  • Spoiler Antonio CG #11 After the update to MC's face. It looks like Antonio is with his twin
  • Spoiler Blake CG #4 Darn I wish this one shows the the drunk man blowing Blake haha
  • Spoiler Blake CG #8 Blake is shown to be uncut in other CGs but is shown to be cut in this one.
  • Spoiler Chris CG #1 I feel like Chris should be the focus in his CGs but this one doesn't really focus on him.
  • Spoiler Chris CG #3 His right arm looks like it broke off and his left hand disappeared.
  • Spoiler Chris CG #6 Chris suddenly gets chest hair even though he doesnt have them in other CGs
  • Spoiler Couple CG #2 The Dominant's tattoos aren't in the CG. Then again personally I like CG Dominant's face more than the regular one.
  • Spoiler Couple CG #4 After the MC face reveal, he looks sad and unbothered? The last one had a better guttural reaction.
  • The MC face reveals in Darius' CGs are great!
  • Spoiler Darius CG #1 #2 #3 #9 His eyes looks obviously edited and unnatural in these. I know AI sucks at generating eyes and it looks like you already tried to edit them to look better. But #8 and #10 just did it so well that these ones don't look as good as those two.
  • Spoiler Elias CG #8 His right hand is deformed
  • Spoiler Elias CG #9 His fingers look like all thumbs.
  • Spoiler M CG #1 MC's head looks obvious it is edited because the lighting doesnt really match.
  • Spoiler Tentacle CG #1 MC's pubes are green. Is that intentional?
  • Spoiler Tentacle CG #2 The new CG update made the guy not match the people who showed up with Blake. Was that intentional?
  • Spoiler for Day 5 Since MC is revealed to be Hugh Jackman, thanks for fulfilling so many fantasies hahah. I loved having CGs of him with Cthulhu and werewolf. I did wish there was a CG after I have lifted the curse heheh.

I know getting the specific image to generate is probably hard and requires many tries. So if any of the above can’t be addressed, that’s fine too. Hopefully it wasn’t too nitpicky.

Thanks again for the great game!!

Wow. Thank you very much for your big analysis. I'll have it in account but I don't know if I'll be able to do everything. Anyways, I'll try to improve the ones that have basic errors at least. And yes, Chris should have the makeover. Mainly in the face. I did not like it as it was before and I've redone it. And please, keep making posts like this. They are very welcome. Ah... could you contact me by email please? smaugpuppy@gmail.com

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I've started to redo or repair some of the graphics. I'll upload the new ones with the new release ....

Repaired all till the Couple CG2. 

The tatoos should not appear. Look where are they places and the position in the CG. They are in places that remain hidden in the CG.

Ok. All images reviewed. They will be released in the following update with Day 6. Note: Tentacles 2 is intended, yes.