Interesting game. I think the creatures need a bit more speed and more clear sounds when they are near (groaning). There is a lot of exposition, and when you get to the fighting it feels as slow as reading the dialogue. The music could also be a bit more actiony i know its more atmospheric to have gentle music and just the sound effects, but for the art style it feels...underwhelming.
Overall i like the idea, i just think it needs some tuning!