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As far as story building goes, one suggestion. 

Well, two : change the bright eye-searing red color of this site. I was partially color blind after reading that 16 paragraph story.

And two - If you're building a world where this game doesn't exist,. and shouldn't work; then why is it here on Itch.io as a downloadable, working game? 

I think your story would work better if you added something like " This is the only working copy found, I cleaned the code up as best as I could to get it to run and install correctly, and uploaded it here to preserve it " 

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Also Also, the 3D presented in the game is true 3D, which wasn't possible at the time. Only DOOM's fake 3D was around ( and you cite DOOM as a timeline guide ) DOOM is constructed entirely on a 2D flat plane, the game is actually 2D.

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