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A jam submission

LAST BREATH (a mission pack for FIST)View project page

Submitted by kumada1 (@SprintingOwl) — 23 days, 21 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
SUBSTANCE#203.5784.000
STYLE#212.9073.250
Overall#213.2423.625

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

Very cool collection of missions, with a very practical presentation and good use of visuals, will be looking forward to running these at the table someday!

Developer(+1)

Thanks!

Submitted(+1)

A great collection of missions, all presented in a simple but effective layout. At first glance it looks like raw text, but your quickly realise an intentional choice has been made with regards to the presentation. 

I look forward to mining these missions for inspiration.

Developer(+1)

Thanks!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Why you should check this out: a well put together set of creative (and occasionally dark) short scenarios. Even if you don’t play them, they’re amazing inspiration!

Style: a solid single column layout, the font and the public domain black and white spot art gives this a similar vibe to FIST, allowing the content to be the focus.

Structure: the scenarios are 3-4 A5(?) pages. Thought has clearly gone into this, with clear headings splitting each mission into tactics (the general setting), espionage (info for the referee) and action (info as the scenario develops).

Content: the scenarios are concise, varied and creative. My favourite is a scenario set after a raid on a cult that has the players working to undo the consequences of their actions. An equestrian multiverse is a close second.

What might I change?

  • Layout: the page numbers draw the eye to the bottom of the page, they could be de-emphasised
  • Structure: table of contents - might be cleaner to just do the 1st level of headings and maybe a single sentence summarising each mission

Edit: not sure I got the name of the font correct!

Developer(+1)

I didn't see there was some extra text here vs what was on the page, but the changes you recommend are good! I auto-generate most of my TOCs, but I should mess with the format more.