A New Age (Opening): This track has some similarities that make me think of Welcome to the Black Parade by My Chemical Romance. But the instrumentation gives it a much more classical sound. Very jovial and celebratory theme!
Forest of Time: I appreciate your use of counterpoint in this track. One thing I notice that sticks out in my ear a little is that sometimes the bass or low line moves in the way that a melody normally would, but sometimes those low frequencies don’t always do well with holding dissonant or non-diatonic notes the same way that a higher line would. This causes this track to have a couple places that feel a little too dissonant, but it only happens momentarily and the rest is great!
Century Peaks: I like how the main theme seems to poke its head in even though this track has its own unique sound. I like the use of the 3 over 2 polyrhythms which adds a rhythmic flare to the otherwise straightforward rhythm.
Hourglass Desert: This piece feels much darker. I appreciate your use of stepwise downward motion as if to symbolize sand falling down through an hourglass. I think that your dissonances work stylistically well here. The crunch of some of the notes makes me shudder a bit in the way that I think you are trying to invoke.
Immortal Seas: More polyrhythms! The triplet feel and the use of chromatic passing tones gives a sense of ocean-faring shanty-like energy. I like how you use multiple melody lines at once when the strings have the dance-like melody and the horns have the more drudging theme.
Overclock Capital: This track has a very serious tone to it. I really like your percussion work on this one!
Time and Time Again (Ending): I can hear the echoes of the first opening track in this one. This particular chord progression that is a hallmark of this OST sounds so celebratory to me and naturally works really well for a final ending track.
Overall: This is a lot of impressive music with different orchestral styles of sound that is all really enjoyable to listen to. I like that the music itself tells a unique story and takes us to many different places. Great work and thank you for sharing!