Good job for making this wonderful game and having a nice story, but you're making the MC a little bit cocky so that's a minus for me.
KEEP up the good work looking forward for next chapter.
Both.
The core of the story mainly involves adding more details and some additional content.
I feel that as a visual novel game that requires a lot of emotional buildup, its progression was a bit too fast.
The male protagonist and the other two female protagonists will undergo some changes in their background settings, and two new female characters will be introduced.