Hi! Thank you so much for your comprehensive feedback. It was a delight to read, and I’m so glad you chose to check Mortal Coil out. It means so much that you enjoyed the synth-wave and the photograph’s aesthetics; that you noticed and liked our detail there makes me so happy.
Your nitpicks are very appreciated: we’ll definitely work on the text-box formatting and figure out more animation for the next build!
Thank you again, and I hope you enjoy the full version when it comes out!
~ Rose.