Oh, this was a very interesting piece of art! Honestly, as someoen who's been practicing poetry for eight years, I started to think about how the forms it could take nowadays with a multimedia way of expressing it!! It reminds me of calligrams. You created something very interesting here and I think we should be exploring this more!
For the actual text, now, I enjoyed the circular motif, and the connection to nature by senses! The renewal of these sensations (imitating the one of seasons, or the days cycling) was something I appreciated!