um I am partially confuse that Valorie is a little sister right? and Joel is The Big Bro. But Valorie called to him as Little brother.
To think that Valorie the big sis is in Highschool when Joel the little bro is a working adult. How did that happened I am confused dev. xD
I am a spanish speaking creator, the reason why he calls him "little brother" is because of affection, in spanish it is "hermanito" diminutive of "hermano", as in japanese "onii-chan" is used only in the form of affection, I don't have much practice in english, so to translate I must resort to other tools, that's why the translation could look rough. But, in each update I always try to improve the translations, but as it is not my native language, there will always be flaws.
If you have any recommendation, I will pay attention to it :)
ahh ok. well i notice that other conversation was machine translated. I got weird by calling Joel as little bro and Valorie as little sis.
Well I think this game is fast pace for now because its easy to play it. I already saw the 3 endings and read it. What challenging here is the part where could i get those H-scene because it doesn't have galleries.
but its ok not having galleries because it will become hidden scenes I didn't encounter it will be engaging to replay again.
Story is great but not hard like you can talk to her with choices where she will have negative or positive love gain. So its a one route it will be take.
Mechanics is good but you put the risk level here the Valor. it would be good if it doesn't have that kind of level to risk like looking at the door key knob or sneeking into the showers without damaging the Love number.
Well you can alternate it if the Love number is above now. Well i didn't focus on valor. that was why Joel got to join to Valorie's bath time. yep its over 200+ and valor was +100.
Also the routes are already open like karaoke and fireworks festival and beach. I think you need something that will trigger this events. because for just 2 weeks you can confess to her in the fireworks.
The money i think its on progress as i think. You definitely didn't upgrade it because Joel will be a millionaire within a month. Well I think it is good for now because its on development.
The other thing was the day. Morning, Noon, Afternoon, Evening, Night. I think its best to make a text of it below the icon or week on the right top corner.
This is the things that i honestly pointed at. so take it or leave it if you have ways for your next update.
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This is the things that I only wanted to in the future updates.(if possible.)
1. Story Quest.
2. Event Quest.
3. Trigger Events.
4. Talking to Valorie with player's way.
5. Valorie's love decreasing if you don't spend time or talk to her.
6. having status. like depress, nervous, relief, relax, obsess. below the lust meter
7. Prenancy chance. like safe days or risky days. so that you cannot spend your birth control every possible way.
8. Item box/inventory
9. Joel's salary upgrade
10. Date request from Valorie if the became couple. (also Valorie will take the initiative to invite Joel in dates.)
Well that is all dev elJukee. I think this is enough to brainstorm this kind of updates in the future Valorie's Life game.(whether you take it or not. its your choice.)
I assume that you will update this more at the perfect game. Do your best. :D
