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As I promised I looked you up on AO3 and I didn't expect to find this many stories. You really are in love with writing, aren't you? I was checking out one of your stories, from 2017, maybe you remember it again. It is awsome. Rin and Haru remind me of another couple (more about it down below). Your writing style and creativity is more than I imagined. I thought you just love writing so much that you have to do it. In fact you are very talented.

There is one more thought I want to share. It is kind of a weird one. As I was reading chapter by chapter I felt like you were writing an emotional story in an unemotional way. I don't know how else I could explain this. You know what I think it is my 'fault'. I love reading about the two, even if I am pretty cold hearted. I am thankful your story is not heartbreaking (at least I think it isn't). If it was like Echo I would quit, honestly.. 😪

Reading VN's and wattspad stories plus Take My Breath Away now is inspiring. I would love to write in English, but I would never reach your niveau. English is not my native language, so I don't know many important phrases. My skills in your language are only fine for the daily life.

I will be happy to check out more amazing narratives of yours.

You don't say no to what? If I may ask.

Like you I follow many Patreons too, 18 in total.

I know you like him alot and maybe he becomes a nice guy later in the plot, but I can't get along with his look. To me he doesn't look like a lion at all really and it irritates me.

You can do that? You pay only when Darius route receives an update?

In my sence he is both awkward and odd. His behavior is just too unnatural at times.

I think I get it. Couldn't it be that there are two Hitchhiker's movies. I'm almost certain I saw both in the IMDb.

You deserved a caring family after your real parents and siblings treated you so wrong. It's good to see you happy in this case.

My god aunt and her husband are both very christian. She, Karin, once had an unbelievable accident that almost killed her. It happend years ago. They went to Peru for working in a newly found hospital. Well, on one day they had to walk at the side of a road a few meters above the ground, because it was flooded. There it happend. She fell and people say it was a wonder she that she survived. Apparantly the house's roof she fell on was the only one in miles. The real reason why she survived is she had a backpack on and landed on her back.

Now think of the old folklores and compare it to what is happening these days. Back then many people were superstitious. Today we read about demons magicians and other beings/things like it is the best. Isn't it funny? You have to admit it is a bit incomprehensible and almost shocking.

Don't worry as you know I like reading about stuff like this too for some reason. Yesterday when I was writing this for the second time... I was watching a video of the very new horror game Visage, in between.

And yes I have to admit Ciel hasn't lost the ability to feel emotions. He does care, although very little or he tries to hide it to not look weak.

By the way you reminded me of something... I was watching the first season of Black Butler, but forgot to continue the series. Instead I started watching Naruto Shippuden. What can I say I do not regret it. Naruto and Sasuke remind of Rin and Haru. Their relationship/connection is characterized by competition as well as Naruto's and Sasuke's. One more reason why I like Naruto Shippuden is because he is hot! He's one of a very few anime characters who are sexy. I said I didn't like Naruto (first series), but it changed with Shippuden. Now he doesn't appear like a child or idiot anymore, sometimes, which is a good thing.

Yesterday, on my second attempt, I wrote almost more or maybe it was more than everything above (from yesterday) about the topic music... Please tell me if you are interested in it and I will try to regain/gather my thoughts.

I couldn't manage to finish Take My Breath Away, but I will.

(This heat is killing me and it's propably not even close to the temperature you have to face ;/

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Samtoinette6 years ago

To address the embarrassing part first, I'm... Adventurous in the bedroom. That's what I meant when I said I don't say 'no'.

I'm flattered you think I'm talented, thank you!

I hate sad endings, so even if there's some angst, I always make sure there's a happy ending, even if it's like the end of The Notebook and the couple dies together on their deathbed. So you'll never find an Echo-like story by me.

Also, I'm not an emotional person. As a result, I think that's why I write stories that are emotional in a non-emotional way lol.

Darius explains why he doesn't have a mane later on, but you can convince him to keep it. He looks so good with a mane I've never played through and told him to lose it.

Lions don't have manes their entire lives anyway, and females don't get them at all. You could kinda think of him as a lioness at first, that lacks boobs and has a dick haha.

And yeah, I'll pay for a month and immediately cancel the subscription, so I have one paid month and get two updates for $3, then it doesn't charge me for the following month.

Hell, even in the original Naruto, he and Sasuke wound up sharing a kiss. Even though it was accidental, it happened.

I didn't watch enough of Shippuden to see how their relationship goes there, but I definitely saw a Rin/Haru type of relationship in Naruto, except that I feel like Haru shows he cares more than Sasuke does.

I'm not really sure what the temperature is right now, but you're probably right that it's still hotter here lol.

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Rotun Noctis6 years ago (1 edit)

Uhh embarrassing and it's unnecessary to tell me something like that. I know asked in the first place..

There's no need to be flattered. It's true you are very good. But you have to explain me one thing. Why did you write Rin and Haru as they are some kind of crybabies? I am not really looking for stories with alot of lemon (not that lemon^^). A happy ending though is always welcome. Not sure if I ever told you this. I read a book series not long ago written by a german bestseller author and his wife. It is one of my most favoured book series, but the end is so, so bad and sad. What I never expected to happen. The hero dies his allies/friends die and his friend (who always pretended to be his friend) turns against him after “coming back from the dead“. It's traumatizing and a plot that develops that way is so dark.

As I said I am watching Naruto Shippuden and there some people have insane, unbelievable, unbearable fates. For a kids show the amount of blood, rage, vengeance, ... Is pretty crazy if you ask me. In my opinion it should definetly be fsk 16 or 12, if it is 6.

Are you unemotional in general or just when it comes to sad stories? Because I can't say I am unemotional. I often have to laugh when a fight happens in Naruto. The absurdity of many moments is just too funny.

Well, I can not say I can imagine a male lion without mane. Even then he'd look weird in my book. I knew that lioness never grow a mane, I think. You like the thought of a boob lacking, dick packing lioness? haha 😜

You know I should propably care more about the money I get from my parents, but I don't use it for me. I only baught many clothes a while ago, because I needed them. Instead I pay 4 visual novels monthly for a few euros. I don't really think it is selfish of me. Tell me if you think different and I might reconsider what I do...

The best part about them sharing a kiss is that they do it TWICE! In Shippuden there is a scene about the past as they were kids where it happens again.

It's pretty sad. In Shippuden Sasuke doesn't care at all for Naruto first. Instead he even hates him! I know as much that Naruto marries Hinata later on in the story or in Boruto (Boruto is Naruto's and Hinata's son). To me he always seemed like he was the gay type of guy. But who am I to decide something like this?

Does it rain often in your state? Here the weather is mostly mild or damp/humid. It doesn't rain everyday, but the sky is also not bright blue everyday. As best you can describe our weather as cloudy, boring, oppresive and depressing. Okay, maybe that is a bit too exaggerating... but only a bit.

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Samtoinette6 years ago

I don't actually recall what I wrote, but Rin actually is a crybaby in the series.

Compared to Attack on Titan, Naruto and Shippuden are a walk in the park.

I'm generally unemotional in all aspects, though when I connect to characters I will get emotional.

No, Darius is really attractive with a mane. More attractive than he is without it.

I don't see anything wrong with doing what you want with the money you get. Personally, I'd save most of it, but that's me.

I think the weather here is considered normal for the most part. Sunny days are common with blue skies, there's rainy days here and there, cloudy days, blah blah blah.

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Rotun Noctis6 years ago

Do you really think so? You haven't seen Shippuden yet. As I said some scenerios and fates are almost too much to compensate them. Seriously some are unbearable for the characters. For example Satori (I think he's called), one of the Akatsuki's, is a puppeteer who turned his own parents into puppets to pretend they love him! Or Itachi (&Madara) who killed his own clan+family, except his younger brother Sasuke, because they were a too high risk and threat for the ninja world!

I know why you say so, AoT is brutal no questioning that. I know I haven't seen everything about it, like you about Naruto.

I can relate. A game where no one dies is pretty much boring. So don't connect to every single one of the characters, but if you do to minor characters hope for the best. Rather hope it's a main character.

Currently Password is my favorite visual novel. The latest Tennis Ace update felt off. The first half was amazing. The second half off it is so wrong.

Adastra has become a whole lot more complicated. The cliffhanger at the end is something to be proud of...

The concept that the “chosen one“ in Password has to die first in order to be rescued (shout out to Rescue Me - OneRepublic)

is very cool, not to say unique. I also think Password is very well written. It's propably one of the best written visual novels. I especially like the conflicts that come with the latest patch and the whole bunch of emotions. It's unbelievably good, at least I feel that way.

To me Darius still doesn't look like a lion. His mane is not an actual mane...

Well, because I don't care enough for... shit... I don't really think about money. Right now I'm lucky anyway, cause I don't need it. Saving the money is off course the smartest and most logic conclusion.

I downloaded a few “visual novels“ from the PlayStore which have a good reputation. There are some that seem suspiciously good. Tokyo Summoners is a popular Japanese game currently translated into English.

A guy on Patreon suggested me a game with the title Major/Miner he quite liked. I haven't tried it yet.

Okay, are you saying the weather is very similar to ours? Maybe it is who knows.

Do you have anything interesting to talk about maybe?

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Samtoinette6 years ago

Ah, no, I know all about that stuff in Naruto. I watched the original when he was a kid, I only skipped the filler episodes, and I made it a few dozen episodes in Shippuden before I lost interest. It's been yeeeears since I've watched it though, and I'm surprised it's still popular. I felt the same way with SpongeBob.

I just don't think wiping out your entire clan is as brutal as the story of the Titans... One of the character's mothers is turned into a deformed one, fully aware of who her son is when he passes by, but there's no way to turn her back. Was that in season one? I don't remember.

There's the ones who are ripped apart by Titans, different ones grabbing different limbs and pulling. Among other things.

I haven't played Password yet, and I'm behind on Tennis Ace and Adastra.

-shrugs- I think he looks like a lion, but whatever. Your preference.

Well, I just mean, you won't have your family to look after you for the rest of your life which is why saving it is the smart choice.

Not really interesting. I'm sick, my girlfriend and I had a small fight. I'm having trouble thinking with the sinus headache.

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Rotun Noctis6 years ago (1 edit)

With that wall of text you have at least something else to think about at the moment. You are welcome. :)

Iam not your mom, but I am telling you anyway: don't overdo yourself if you are weak. Your body thanks you!

Ok, well I didn't know. I made it to like episode 250 in Shippuden and took a break. There are way too many episodes, so I skipped small parts within the episodes. It's incredible how they managed to create all these. I can't think of a series bigger than Naruto Shippuden. (Doctor Who? Idk)

Sponge Bob, really? 😅🙄 There are a few things I don't understand about humanity. One thing is why people like Sponge Bob and The Simpsons. (I know Disenchantment is similar, but still) Maybe I would like The Simpsons though, if I'd look into it more.

Aaand that's your opinion. What I listed are not the only, big tragedies happening in Shippuden.

Titans who are ripping humans apart and a mother who turns into a deformed Titan? Ridiculous! Naruto learns how to create and use the “Wind-Hideout Rasengan Shuriken“ which, if successfully hitting a person, shoots hundreds of “Shakra Needles“ (like lasers) through the whole body! The story of the original Akatsukis is so sad. You should've seen Pain (Nagato) at the end or much worse Kabuto, a former Orochimaru follower, who has mastered the forbidden Jutsu Oro was working on. I don't think you are continuing on Shippuden so I tell it. Kabuto is capable of bringing the dead back UNDER his control AND these people are fully aware of what is going on! The result is in the Fourth Great Ninja War friends have to fight against friends and even family members vs. family members! I don't think it can get much worse than this...

Why Naruto is a kids show is a mystery to me.

By the way have you seen The Last Airbender? A show that will return this time in Netflix. Netflix is working on an adaption.

Too bad :/

Start Password as soon as you have time. It's so good! And because you love horror it should be perfect for you. I am sure I can say it's concept is very unique. It reminds me of Life is Strange which is definetly similar.

Tennis Ace was a huge disappointment. Propably the other routes are better I don't even know and don't care...

Adastra seems to turn from a happy, little adventure into a nightmare and I don't like this. It's what Howley is best in writing

I'm propably too critical with all these visual novels, but I'm Patron of some of them, so if possible I want the best possible outcome for all.

I downloaded Major/Minor from the PlayStore. It's yet another visual novel which a guy on Patreon suggested me.

How could I argue with that? The thing is I don't want to be dependent on my parents. I want to make my own money.

I never know how to return a favor with presents/gifts or something else. I am bad at it. But giving a bought “something“ is so dump. I wouldn't be able to stand seeing a family member or friend struggle with pretended happyness.

Have you heard? I got my driving license on wednsday! :D I am so happy I made it through and on my first try. With my ADD it was a difficult birth (German saying...) all in all. The beginning was very hard. The theory exam was surprisingly easy on the other hand. Well, I'm glad it's over now.

Have you seen The Boys? I don't know if it is a problem that it's an Amazon Original or not. The Boys is a macabre, odd, brutal, comical, action comedy thriller series with a very high rating. If you don't know what you should watch next maybe you will like it. The always recurring humor is pretty darn dark. (IMDb 8.9) For now there are only 8 episodes.

If this is the case I hope you're getting better soon. Is it bad or just a cold? I never heard of a sinus headache. Apparantly it's true: you learn something new every day ...

It is said fights are part of a marriage, an important part of a relationship to be happy together. But if she wants a divorce I fly over as fast as I can and teach her a lesson! If I could have a boyfriend I would want him to be a bit like you. ;) (No joke)

Maybe after a fight your situation seems more clear to you. Although I think ultimately they're no use. You will work it out, right? I don't know her, but you. You are a smart, rational woman.

Have you ever thought of talking about the dispute/fight with the other involved person? It may sound silly at first, but there's a chance you can laugh about it, together, at the end of the day.

If you want, only if, I can maybe help you with the reason why the fight happend in the first place.

(I don't want to be intrusive though)

I wish you the best of luck with figuring something out ;/

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Samtoinette6 years ago

The fight with my partner was resolved within 24 hours because we discussed it. She had some misconceptions about how I felt about our relationship and at first didn't believe me when I tried to quell her fears.

Honestly I'm not even sure if the Naruto Shippuden manga is finished or not... And yeah probably the only one that could contest Naruto Shipp for the longest lasting series would be Doctor Who.

I admit to liking SpongeBob, but I did stop watching it a long time ago.

I also really like The Simpsons. I don't know if you'd like it if you watched more of it or not, because they make fun of everyone like South Park, but they're less crude about it.

Oh god... Netflix is gonna ruin The Last Airbender... Okay at least I expect them to. Honestly their Invader Zim (late 90's/early 00's) and Rocko's Modern Life (early-mid 90's) specials were SO GOOD. Same voice actors and everything, they were phenomenal. If they'll stay that way with the full series of Invader Zim or not I don't know.

However, I do know there's certain things Netflix is really liberal about... Frankly everyone is these days. Shoving homosexuality (We make up 5% of the population ffs!), Interracial couples (I don't mind them, even liked a black person here and there, but they're not THAT common), and modern feminism (Just... No) down everybody's throats and it influences everything Netflix produces.

The only thing I can hope is that they won't redo the story of Aang or Korra. Granted I wouldn't be opposed to an Aang/Zuko ship, but the originals are fine so don't mess with 'em.

I've stepped away from VNs for now, but I'll try to pick up Password.

The latest Tennis Ace update was forgettable. I think it was like Shuuichi couldn't meet up with the MC for a few days and MC got depressed?

Personally Shuuichi's is my least favorite route. I know you like the best-friends-turned-lovers stories, but sometimes those aren't the best. I prefer Keisuke's route right now, but that's because the last Jun update broke my heart. Like, I'm legitimately haunted by the look on Jun's face at the end of the festival.

I know I rave about Darius on Extracurricular Activities, but I prefer THEIR BFF-to-lover story to the one in Tennis Ace... Though it feels weird when the MC gives Spencer pats or brushes him. He acts the most animal-like of all of them so it approaches beastiality a little too much for my comfort.

I'm about halfway through the newest Adastra update, so I haven't seen the nightmare fuel yet.

Do you know if they have plans to implement more dating choices? I can't get over that sexy jackal.

It's not being 'dependent' on your parents to put the money you get in allowances into the bank; it's just good sense.

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Rotun Noctis6 years ago

I don't think you want to talk about your relationship with your girlfriend with me, so I won't answer to that.

But it's defiently good how you could talk with her. I of course was mostly joking about the divorce, but actually you can never be sure, right? Imo homosexuell couples 'should' be more happy in principle than straight couples and also fight harder to stay together in case they love each other enough. There isn't quite enough “fresh meat“ for tons of couple variations. I hope you know roughly what I'm trying to say.

When my time comes I want to have such a strong connection and relationship to one another like the guys from StepsOf2Foreigners.

Uh... Naruto manga? I don't know either. I watched a few anime recently and all were pretty good. I heard the second season of Darker than Black is bad, wish it was good. Honestly there are more series than I thought that could rival the length of NaruShipp. I couldn't think of one at the moment though. Well maybe Dragonball...

S'fine, you watched shows on tv mainly produced in your country and I watched shows that were created in germany. I only saw Sponge Bob when I was already old enough to watch more thrilling things, I guess, and I can imagine me liking The Simsons, but I rather not watch it. Currently The Dark Crystal (a Netflix remake) is on my list and it's not bad at all. (On IMDb 8.8) The characters are like dolls or puppets that move on their own. Sometimes it's a bit disgusting, buuut whatever. 😃

You mentioned South Park. I never watched it? I don't think I would like it. I have seen American Dad and something with a valley in the title, that's it. Admittedly I watched Disney shows like Phineas&Ferb/ Camp Lakebottom when I shouldn't have done it, because of my age.

Now though I am all in for animes 😊 As mentioned Darker than Black is very good. If you'd like it is another question.

Ahh 😵 DON'T put the devil on the wall!! (what is the English equivalant to that??) or else it's gonna be worse than The Legend of Aang (the movie). Asking me after the possibility of _that_ is like asking me “How often can Jack Norris be revived“. (What an old meme smh...)

Uhm I never heard of Life of Zim (?) and Rocki's Modern World (?). Kidding kidding ✌️(I'm in a good mood right now🌞) Are these series really as good as you say? And what genre are they from?

Is it that bad with Netflix? I do NOT watch everything this platform produces, so I can't say for sure... I like Netflix's TEOTFW, ST, (Dark maybe), Dark Crystal, Love;Death&Robots...

5% are gay? I do hope so... Don't mind interracials either.

Agreed TLA is a masterpiece and if they ruin it again it's going to be a disaster for the fans! ⚡

I, well I stepped away from TA, stopped supporting. I told my honest opinion and what I like about the last Sho update and I didn't even receive an answer. Call me selfish, because I am. Still, I just said their sex scene was too much of the “good stuff“. I explained my position good enough I'm sure. In my opinion the pacing was off with how Juu felt. I wanted Sho to be the bottom for ONCE fuck it all... Juu said it himself he wanted to keep control and in the end _that_ happend. I was very disappointed. I kind of felt betrayed. Do you think it's justified or not?

None of them was really depressed, and when it was Shoichi. (I think, I don't wanna replay)

Keisuke may be another good choice for Juu, but I can't abandon BBS (best boy Shoichi #teamShoichi) Soo... did WOTB 'ruin' Jun's route? It almost sounds like it.

Spencer and the MC is better than Yuuichi and Shoichi? Hmm, why do you say this? Brushing and patting is something human lovers can do too yk? I wouldn't go so far to call it beastiality, but yes beastiality is part of the “odd and strange fetish fan club“.

Yeah “the jackal“, just remembered his name is Neferu when I opend the game, is a hottie. I asume there's more about him that one would like. He is a little bit selfish, but I mean who doesn't want to sleep with a big bad wolf like Amicus? =^.^=

We can just hope for the nightmare to brighten up soon. I don't want another Echo. Echo is going through a beauty phase. They team is working on expressions for the characters and other things you might find interesting.

Right. I can't argue with that.

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Samtoinette6 years ago

Heh, yeah. You're saying we don't have as big of a pool of fish to choose from than straight people do. I know. It doesn't stop homo couples from having huge fights though.

The Dark Crystal is a series based on a movie of the same name. It was by Jim Henson. Same guy that did The Muppets-- Kermit the Frog, Gonzo, Ms. Piggy, etc.

That's why they're all puppets, it was Henson's specialty and his son continued his work when he died.

I watched Phineas and Ferb... Why was it weird for you to watch it? What age?

Devil on the wall might be "jinx it" in America. We say "don't jinx it" when we don't want something to happen.

Yeah the movie was terrible... What was Shamaylan thinking? The only people who liked it hadn't watched the anime.

Well, Invader Zim is a dark cartoon. Not as dark as the creator wanted because Nickelodeon wanted him to make it for kids around 7 years old, but still dark. I can't even really describe it without giving anything away. One episode, Zim is sick and Dib (arch rival) tells him the nurse will know he's an alien when looking at him, so Zim steals his fellow students' organs and replaces them with other objects.

Another, there's a time machine and Zim keeps throwing in things to screw up Dib's life-- and succeeds. Dib even dies in that episode but Nickelodeon didn't let him stay dead.

Rocko's Modern Life should've NEVER been on a kids station at all. Kinda like several other cartoons, it had adult jokes EVERYWHERE. It was like Ren and Stimpy.

As for genre of them... I guess Invader Zim would be horror, and Rocko would be like slice of life or something.

Cartoons were originally created for adults, but were later geared towards children. The best cartoons are the classics-- Looney Toons, Tom and Jerry, classic Mickey Mouse (when he was still mischievous; something the game Epic Mickey tried to bring back).

Betty Boop was originally meant for adult men who wanted to see scantily clad women.

Yes, Netflix is constantly pushing an agenda. Probably why I prefer foreign shows, because they can't say much about what they produce. I say that after finishing Season One of The A List. Good show, worth a watch.

In the case of Jun, he's the newest member. WOTB explained why his route had that end to the festival and it makes sense. Basically the MC, notoriously bad at making decisions, isn't sure how he feels about Jun. The festival end is heartbreakingly beautiful.

I don't think it ruined his route, I just think that'll make their union that much sweeter when it does come.

I say I prefer Spencer and the MC in EA because I connect more with their feelings for each other. I know humans can pet too, but that weird dog look Spencer gets when he's being brushed is just off-putting to me. He makes me think of a pet, not a boyfriend... Then again, if furries were a reality, I'd definitely be into felines. I love purring. It's my favorite sound.

Shoichi just strikes me as kind of... Flat. His personality is non-existent, really.

Yeeees Neferu is so sexy.

I've been obsessed with jackals since I was a kid. My favorite Egyptian god was Anubis, so seeing a jackal in a dating game makes me go "come for me, daddy"

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Rotun Noctis6 years ago

What about the movie The Witch? It's really great, especially the main actress.

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Rotun Noctis6 years ago (3 edits)

Found a big blockbuster totally not on purpose. It is a Korean movie that reminds me of Twilight (why you have to find out:) without a lovestory, but better story and plot. The main character is propably my favourite actress from now on. The movie is from 2018 and has a rating of 7 stars. For me though it's a 10/10. Actress Kim Da-mi won a total of 8 awards only for that roll...

Don't pay attention to the slow/confusing/boring story telling in the beginning. Ah and the title is misleading.

Name of the movie is The Witch: Part 1 - The Subversion.

It is without a doubt one of my favourite movies. It may not have the most intelligent story, but the action scenes should be worth your time.

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