You have a great attention to detail when it comes to storytelling, I loved the neighbourhood environment and all the little tidbits that helped tell the story. And your character work was fantastic, really gave the game a bit more juice.
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story. And yes, I am not American. You cited problems with semantics. Could you explain to me exactly what you meant for me to improve more and more? I've been studying the English language in depth and I've been doing research on slang from each place that I'm looking to portray in the form of art in games. The place of the time was New York. I tried to portray slang and ways of speaking there. Might something have sounded out of place or weird to you?
Hi, I love an enthusiastic developer and will follow you for updates on Delilah’s story. You created a really lovely environment and fun characters that made this game stand out.
So, I am not native English speaker myself but know enough that “homecoming” is a term often used to describe an event for former high school students who basically have a reunion. And it’s so common to use the word as such, that any other use is overshadowed by this definition.
Additionally “much movement lately” probably is Delilah asking the taxi driver if the day has been busy. You’d rather say “Busy day” or something like that since “movement” is more tied to actual physical movement (or “a movement” which is more political) and not business, traffic or interactions.
Those were the main things. It was still fine because as a player I still knew what you meant. It’s just the small semantic differences between someone who translates from a different language to English vs. someone who writes and thinks English, not a big deal, really.
this game is really unsettling when you actually start walking back home & I was so dumb at the grocery store.. didn’t know I had to pick up the shopping cart.
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story. And the shopping basket is a kind of a "Puzzle". XD
Damn, very good game. I made a short story about her, in the form of a book, if I may say so, and at the same time a review. And in short, the finale of the prologue is really intriguing. The plot is rather unusual, and one can discuss for a long time who attacked the main character after all. From the technical side, everything is also cool - I did not notice any bugs, and the FPS is very good. So yes, I definitely liked this game)
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story. I only had time to read the comments for now. I will watch all the videos and I will need more time to watch yours because I am not fluent in your native language. Thank you very much for this tribute. I will definitely translate your video and watch it!! I am very motivated by this kind of comment.
It would be great. Thanks! I'm just finishing watching other people's videos, collecting feedback, and I'm coming to your video. Would it be for your You tube video with automatic subtitles?
I don’t know about subtitles yet, but there should be automatic translation. As a last resort, I can just give the full translation of my voice here if you want)
I LUUVED talking to the people, and dinner shopping was super fun XD. Just gotta keep safe in these scary streets XD 😱 Can't wait to see what happens after!!!
Thanks for playing! Yes, in the future. I'm only 1 person producing not only this one but other stories. It takes a long time to program everything, model, animate and create the story. Consider following me to get notified about Delilah's story that isn't over yet. And of course… new stories in the future.
I'm sorry to hear that. I think you just didn't saw the shopping basket at the entrance of the store. XD you need to grab one before taking any groceries (Sort of a puzzle in the game).
Hands down one of the better games ive played recently the artstyle was so good and the game was done amazing i loved the graphics and just the way the game felt the ending had me stressing lmao 9/10 from me cant wait to see what u do next! ~Wang
The atmosphere of the city made of polygons is really good. I liked that it not only surprised me but also scared me psychologically in a suspenseful way. It is a realistic horror film!
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this psx suspenseful prologue without satured vhs game experience. Consider following me here on Itch.io or checking out my Patreon or Ko-fi if you want more focused updates on my game development (You can follow along for free on Ko-fi).
Enjoyed this short, succinct horror experience - the street was detailed and the characters and their dialogue was intriguing. Would love to see how this turns out and where Delilah ends up...
The only improvement I would suggest is making the text dialogue snap to the end of a sentence rather than have it filter through, but it's a small thing compared to an otherwise thoroughly enjoyable experience.
HOBO KUNG FU SKILLZ ALL THE WAY!
Unfortunately I didn't find the Easter Egg...unless it had something to do with the mewling cats in the alley?
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. Reading this kind of comment motivates me a lot. And about the dialogues: For narrative reasons, the dialogue is like this, as running is not a possibility for Delilah, after all, she is tired after work. But the good thing is that I already updated the game and the dialogues are no longer extremely slow. They follow the same idea but faster with this update. Consider following me here on Itch to be notified when new games and Delilah's story continues or check out my Patreon or Ko-fi if you want more focused updates on my game development (You can follow along for free on Ko-fi). About the Easter egg... well... all I can say is that it's not hard to find. He just wants more steps if you know what I mean...
Loved the urban setting and the abduction(I guess) theme you're going with, the game looks good, sounds good and plays smoothly and left me looking forward to the next chapter or full version! Keep up the good work, mate! Cheers!
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. I'll update this first part as soon as I finish the second one. It will be richer in detail than it is now. Characters will have unique looks and the map will be deeper.
Hello, I'm new in this world. I like to play games. So I decided to record this game that I fell in love with. The game is beautiful. The atmosphere is great, the action of the game is amazing. I would like to see the continuation of this game. Congratulations. I send much love to you. <3
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. Delilah's story isn't over yet... Consider checking out my Patreon or Ko-fi page if you just want to keep up with development stuff I post there.
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You have a great attention to detail when it comes to storytelling, I loved the neighbourhood environment and all the little tidbits that helped tell the story. And your character work was fantastic, really gave the game a bit more juice.
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story. And yes, I am not American. You cited problems with semantics. Could you explain to me exactly what you meant for me to improve more and more? I've been studying the English language in depth and I've been doing research on slang from each place that I'm looking to portray in the form of art in games. The place of the time was New York. I tried to portray slang and ways of speaking there. Might something have sounded out of place or weird to you?
PS: Cute cat in the end. I love cats!!!
Hi, I love an enthusiastic developer and will follow you for updates on Delilah’s story. You created a really lovely environment and fun characters that made this game stand out.
So, I am not native English speaker myself but know enough that “homecoming” is a term often used to describe an event for former high school students who basically have a reunion. And it’s so common to use the word as such, that any other use is overshadowed by this definition.
Additionally “much movement lately” probably is Delilah asking the taxi driver if the day has been busy. You’d rather say “Busy day” or something like that since “movement” is more tied to actual physical movement (or “a movement” which is more political) and not business, traffic or interactions.
Those were the main things. It was still fine because as a player I still knew what you meant. It’s just the small semantic differences between someone who translates from a different language to English vs. someone who writes and thinks English, not a big deal, really.
PS: Cats are amazing.
played this as part of a 3 scary games, really great little game!
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story.
Really well done and intriguing prologue. Shopkeeper was the most badass dude and I wish we saw him longer. Well done!
I made a video on your game if you're interested :)Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story.
this game is really unsettling when you actually start walking back home & I was so dumb at the grocery store.. didn’t know I had to pick up the shopping cart.
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story. And the shopping basket is a kind of a "Puzzle". XD
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story.
Thank you so much for playing this prologue!! I'm glad you liked it. Consider following me to be notified of new creations and Delilah's story. I only had time to read the comments for now. I will watch all the videos and I will need more time to watch yours because I am not fluent in your native language. Thank you very much for this tribute. I will definitely translate your video and watch it!! I am very motivated by this kind of comment.
don't worry about all this, if you need help with translation, I can provide it)
It would be great. Thanks! I'm just finishing watching other people's videos, collecting feedback, and I'm coming to your video. Would it be for your You tube video with automatic subtitles?
I don’t know about subtitles yet, but there should be automatic translation. As a last resort, I can just give the full translation of my voice here if you want)
Nice game looking forward for your next games
Heres my playthrough
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I am already following you and I am looking forward for your next games
Great game, super scary, great tension throughout the game, well done.
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I LUUVED talking to the people, and dinner shopping was super fun XD. Just gotta keep safe in these scary streets XD 😱 Can't wait to see what happens after!!!
Thanks for playing! Consider following me to get notified about Delilah's story that isn't over yet. And of course… new stories in the future.
is there going to be a update to the game it looks amazing good job def need a part 2! https://www.facebook.com/ZeNNN12/videos/298096496096199
Thanks for playing! Yes, in the future. I'm only 1 person producing not only this one but other stories. It takes a long time to program everything, model, animate and create the story. Consider following me to get notified about Delilah's story that isn't over yet. And of course… new stories in the future.
the scenery was beautiful. played it on my channel!https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5xHTYX6xoxJOG4nPQgv_gw
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遊んでくれてありがとう！ 気に入っていただけて嬉しいです。 デライラの未完の物語を知るために私をフォローすることを検討してください。 そしてもちろん…将来の新しい物語。
wasn't able to pick up the ingredients at the store, can't progress :/
I'm sorry to hear that. I think you just didn't saw the shopping basket at the entrance of the store. XD you need to grab one before taking any groceries (Sort of a puzzle in the game).
GRRRRRR okay im re-installing lol the list didn't say anything about a basket D:
The footsteps from the stalker TOOK ME OUT. Great game !
nice game
Played The Game In The Video
PLS LIKE
loved it :)))
STRANGER DANGER!!!
Played at 13:12 looking forward to the final release.
This game had crazy potential and I loved the direction it was going. I wish there was more but as a little demo game it's great!
Honestly a super fun sim. The kind of realistic horror that I haven't really seen!
Loved it!
WOW time to get kidnapped
The game was VERY interesting. I only wish we got to see the actual threat. But the atmosphere was decent.
Cool game liked the vibe of the city!
She went to buy food on a lonely night
The atmosphere of the city made of polygons is really good. I liked that it not only surprised me but also scared me psychologically in a suspenseful way. It is a realistic horror film!
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this psx suspenseful prologue without satured vhs game experience. Consider following me here on Itch.io or checking out my Patreon or Ko-fi if you want more focused updates on my game development (You can follow along for free on Ko-fi).
The only improvement I would suggest is making the text dialogue snap to the end of a sentence rather than have it filter through, but it's a small thing compared to an otherwise thoroughly enjoyable experience.
HOBO KUNG FU SKILLZ ALL THE WAY!
Unfortunately I didn't find the Easter Egg...unless it had something to do with the mewling cats in the alley?
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. Reading this kind of comment motivates me a lot. And about the dialogues: For narrative reasons, the dialogue is like this, as running is not a possibility for Delilah, after all, she is tired after work. But the good thing is that I already updated the game and the dialogues are no longer extremely slow. They follow the same idea but faster with this update. Consider following me here on Itch to be notified when new games and Delilah's story continues or check out my Patreon or Ko-fi if you want more focused updates on my game development (You can follow along for free on Ko-fi). About the Easter egg... well... all I can say is that it's not hard to find. He just wants more steps if you know what I mean...
The Art Style is really nice! Ready to see more!
Thank you for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue.
Nice work for a prologue, excited to see what the full game has in store!
Thank you for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue.
Thanks for making it!
cool little game!
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue.
Loved the urban setting and the abduction(I guess) theme you're going with, the game looks good, sounds good and plays smoothly and left me looking forward to the next chapter or full version! Keep up the good work, mate! Cheers!
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. I'll update this first part as soon as I finish the second one. It will be richer in detail than it is now. Characters will have unique looks and the map will be deeper.
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue and the "cosy" vibe it gives. Delilah's story isn't over yet... .
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. Delilah's story isn't over yet...
Really good short horror game, i also liked the dialogue for the npcs
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this prologue. Delilah's story isn't over yet... .
Hello, I'm new in this world. I like to play games. So I decided to record this game that I fell in love with. The game is beautiful. The atmosphere is great, the action of the game is amazing. I would like to see the continuation of this game. Congratulations. I send much love to you. <3
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. Delilah's story isn't over yet... Consider checking out my Patreon or Ko-fi page if you just want to keep up with development stuff I post there.
Great game, love these games with the feeling of being watched
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. Delilah's story isn't over yet...
would love to see more of it
Thank you so much for playing!! I'm glad you enjoyed this suspenseful prologue. Delilah's story isn't over yet... PS: This thumbnail XD