Post by Coffee Dragon Studios in [ ! ] Mid-jam Playtesting! (Sat-Mon)

EDIT: WIP is uploaded correctly and can now be played from your browser :D

Pitch/Information: A 15 min CYOA made in Twine following the life and times of a down-on-their-luck sellsword fox as they unintentionally bring about the end of their civilization.

I'd like feedback on: Does it make you want to play more? Does it interest you? Did you have fun? And pretty much anything you might want to bring to my attention.

I need help on: Twine Harlowe Arrays and Custom Macros. I'm having a devil of a time trying to get them to work. I have a hub area that randomly selects available missions based on other variables.

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srncq302 days ago

The setting seemed interesting, and I enjoyed the two plotlines that were in it. I do want to play more. I found the mechanics explanations a bit hard to follow; though, for what it's worth, imo not having the detailed explanations would also work fine.

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Coffee Dragon Studios302 days ago(+1)

woot! thanks! I was struggling to find a way to incorporate instructions into the story but you just inspired the idea to have a 'how to' option right under 'new game'.

Thanks!

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