I looove the cast! ^^_ there are so many colourful characters to fall in love with~ n__n I don't often struggle to pick a favourite, but xou've created so many attractive beastmen that it's hard to pick just 1ne! xD buuut I think i'mma go with Derrick UwU can't beat that kind-hearted husbando type :p
I really like the art, it's absolutely wonderful, and while the title is great, it sounds fairly similar to a lot of other VNs out there, so I would highly advise changing the name to help make xour project stand out amid the rest :)
Xou guys have done a great job so far ^__^ keep up all the good work! >.</