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I just finished it. It's good demo :)

I really like the artstyle. 
I'd tell some more about it but I noticed that you arleady know which part needs to get "polished"

Good start for some bigger story.

I like Paige's style and her personality. And Anna is very cool and funny. I like her too. They look very cute together