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7/10 so far, I'd say. The English translation is bearable(which is more than I can say about some games I've played), but definitely needs a touch up. The artwork is pretty decent. There's something annoying about the page transitions, like unnecessary pages or how they transition... I can't quite put my finger on it. A way to know, like an icon or something, that you're on a portrait/poster picture the you can scroll on would be a nice addition. I like the aspect of the replay gallery and the songs with the option to turn the notification off. I think it would be better if there was a normal photo gallery and then a bonus photo gallery for the "secrets" found and such. A 'hide text' button is always a great feature to add. The idea of the plot regarding telling your story is intriguing. Kinda excited to see where that goes. The tutorials kinda seem like common sense, but would prob be really beneficial for someone playing their first VN. Although, I think some may need moved or re-implemented later in the game, i.e., the 18+ item tutorial since right now you don't even get close to that. Definitely has potential, though.

We are working on improving the English translation bit by bit as there is a lot of text to proofread. In the next update, some improvement will already be noticeable.
As for the transitions, if they bother you, you can disable them in the options menu.
As for the idea of including an icon or caption during the posters, that's something we might include in the future, thanks for the sugestion.
As for the idea of separating the image gallery into two, it's something we've seen in other games, but we chose to leave them as one, due to lack of space in the menu.
We're glad you enjoyed the other aspects of the game and hope you had fun with it.
Thanks for the feedback, it helps us to improve. :)

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Understandable. I know there's loads and loads of text to look over when it comes to these games.

At the end I couldn't remember what it was that bothered me, but I'll keep note of that option when I continue.

You're very welcome. I think something like that would be really helpful.

That makes sense. What about having separate tabs inside of the gallery  itself, instead of the main menu?

I definitely did. The games potential is massive. excited for the completion of it.