Cool narrative platformer! I did like the game and story and especially that last sentence! Though I must say it was a bit hard to read some of the texts as some felt like they zipped right past you and others took forever to build.
The movement speed felt a bit too fast and slippery, while the jump was a bit floaty. I can recommend Mark’s Platformer Toolkit. We did experiment a bit with it and I’m pretty happy with our movement controller (though it’s also not perfect, but oh well - gamejams ;D)
Also I kinda got stuck between platforms once: 
Overall, good job on making a platformer AND a narrative game in this limited time!