That was… Oh my God. One of the very rare times I've tried almost all the possibilities and was intrigued enough to read the extra notes in a VN! This was very sweet and melancholic. Interesting, it really teaches us all a lesson: everyone suffers, so let us all be a little kinder to those around us.
Please make more!! This translation, even though it wasn't perfect, it was great, and I was able to understand everything.
Congrats, cheers! おめでとう!
[I'm slowly learning Japanese.. One day... one day! I wont need to use Google Translate any longer!! >:) ]