I liked it a lot, very good start. I especially enjoyed the interactions between Sandra and Lana. I hope we see them interact more in the future and also that we see them interact with other girls.
There were some things I'd like to see improved though:
- I sometimes found it difficult to navigate, especially the school was a bit confusing at first. The way to Jaro is where you'd usually go back to the exterior screen, so I had to search for that one for a while.
- At the computer it still says to search for a job and not to work after you've found a job. I didn't think the job was working right at first.
- If you meet Lana at college after she's told you she wants to keep a bit of distance she greets you exactly the same. It would be nice if she greeted you slightly differently.
- There's no good way to pass the time currently. I often found myself moving back and forth in order to advance time to some time based event.
- I'd prefer if you didn't see stuff that the protagonist doesn't unless it's really necessary. During the drinking game would it be possible when the player character leaves the room to offer a choice of whether you want to see what happens in his absence or not?