Fantastic game, keep up the great work.
PLEASE tell me there's a path where we get to marry either Beth or Claire!
No, same problem. The window size is right now, and a screen comes up with two buttons saying "Start Game" and "Change Resolution." I clicked on both buttons over and over again, but nothing happened. Then I just started clicking around the screen randomly, and it looks like it started. There was Stacy again, with two buttons at the bottom, "Next" and "Back," and I click them both over and over again, but nothing happens. Nor when I click anywhere else.
Then, to add insult to injury, I reduce the window size in the browser, and when I maximize it again, it's back to being way too big.
The first problem I had was that it was too big for my computer screen. I got that fixed (don't ask me how), but then the problem was, I couldn't advance the screen. There's "Stacy" saying something, so I click the button that says "Next," over and over again, but nothing happens. Must be a glitch of some sort.
Ugh, gross. There's not much I like more than a good futa-on-male game, but do we have to bring incest into it? I mean, I thought this game would be about getting sexually harassed and broken in by sexy futa classmates and teachers in a school setting, but it turns out it's just about getting banged by your mother. You were on such a good track, but you went completely off the rails. What happened? Call me old fashioned, but I believe a guy should have to leave the house to get laid! This Arkansas shit makes me sick.
And why do you call a vagina "sex?" There are many different words you can use for "her vagina." You can say "her pussy," "her beaver," "her muff," "her coochie," "her snizz," "her hoo-hoo," "her baby cannon," "her meat curtains," "her batcave," etc., etc. But "her sex?" No. That means something different.
Thank you for replying to my comment. I've finished the story now, and have a few more insights...
It did get better as it went along. And though I still would much rather have seen that torture and abuse happen to a male than to a female, I do kind of understand now why, plot-wise, the protagonist had to be female, what with the marriage layer and everything. But I still have a couple major problems. In no particular order...
Too kinetic. If there's no choices, there's no game. I liked the story, but with no choices, it's not playing a game, it's just looking at a picture book. Even if two options of a choice circle around and lead back to the same path, that still would have been better than no choices at all.
And it ended too abruptly! I was looking forward to seeing Marie seduce Edmond and torture Cindy some more in the context of their engagement and marriage, but no such luck. It just ends. The series finale of The Sopranos gave better closure than this!
Anyway, you got a lot of good stuff here, but a whole lot of room for improvement too. I wish you good luck with what you create in the future. I know you have it in you.
I've been playing for a while now... I just wish the protagonist was male. It would be a lot more fun to watch this stuff happen to a male instead of a female.
Also, why all the fantasy elements? You couldn't set this in a context that conforms with the biological laws of the real world? There's nothing wrong with the way you've done it, it's just a drag on the story to have to explain all this fantasy-based biology...
I've gotten all the way to the scene where the protagonist goes to the private party in Ashley and Linda's dorm room. I'm very disappointed that there are no choices, it all just follows one path. (Yes, there was that one in the viewing room at the clothing store, but I don't count that because all the choices led to the same outcome.) I'll keep going a bit further, but if no choices come up, I'm not going to waste any more time.
I did really like the conversation the protagonist had with Emma in the library. She really put him in his place. Excellent writing. It's just like I said in my previous comment. The fact that he allows the Bitch Squad to humiliate him only shows that he values their opinion of him. And thus, they own him, and always will until and unless he decides to stop caring what they think about him. So that little pansy deserves everything he's gotten, and I hope they give him more! I really want to see this protagonist get his comeuppance for being such a whiney little pussy. I want to see his bitch ass completely dominated and degraded. But I'm afraid that's not going to happen unless there's choices leading to different possible endings.
The protagonist has a good body and a big dick. He has nothing to be ashamed of. All he had to do was walk into that room with dignity, like a man, and take his underwear back. All he had to do was show those girls that he was unashamed and unafraid, and they would have no power over him. Hell, they probably would have been attracted to his confidence. But instead, he let them get to him, like a pathetic little bitch...
I almost never make a comment after playing just the prologue/intro, but I felt like I had to here. I look forward to an intense FemDom game here, with these four or five goddesses brutalizing and humiliating this protagonist like the pathetic little bitch he is!
Not enough content to make a judgment yet. The character of Camila is downright fascinating! I would love to get FemDominated by her! Maybe forced to work for her gang or something... The other characters... not very interesting. Is there a way to make the aunt character NOT an aunt? Like maybe mom's college roommate or something? Just so it's not so gross? That would be better...
That sounds great, but truth be told, Jennifer is only my fourth, fifth or maybe even sixth favorite character. Number one is Shirley, hands down. Number two and three are Hannah and Natalie, and numbers four, five and six are Jennifer, Serena and Mina. Jennifer's great, I loved taking her shopping and solving a mystery with her, but what I'm especially looking forward to more Shirley, Hannah and Natalie content.
Keep up the great work!
I'm not even going to wait to finish the game, I'm rendering my verdict right now. This is a masterpiece. Five stars, but only because I can't give it more than that.
(SPOILER ALERT) I got to the murder investigation and courtroom scene, and at first I was like, "What the fresh hell is this? I thought this was supposed to be a game about scoring with naughty schoolgirls! I didn't sign up for a murder mystery!" But fuck what I signed up for. It was INCREDIBLE storytelling. I mean, the writing here transcends a porn game. This is art. And speaking of art, the art in this game is literally second to none.
I have no criticisms whatsoever. Keep doing exactly what you're' doing, and don't listen to anybody who says different.