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Banjorune
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You've got a good concept here, I wouldn't be commenting if I didn't like it, but there's definitely room for improvement...
First of all, why the name "Dara?" The fact that it ends with an "a" makes it sound like a girl's name. I thought "Dara" would be a female before his character was introduced. Getting cucked by a guy with a girl's name... doesn't really work.
And Dara should be... oh, how should I put this... BLACK. Even as pathetic as the protagonist is, the idea of getting cucked by an upper-class teenage white boy is kind of laughable. Upper-class white guys are the kind of guys who GET cucked, not the kind of guys who CUCK. Just saying...
And a technical note, I don't know what program you used to create the game, but it's a poor substitute for Renpy. Not being able to save the game when I please or roll back or fast forward through text is quite frustrating.
Good prologue, but I hope the actual game has choices branching paths leading to multiple different endings and isn't just a kinetic novel. And I hope there's a path that leads to a relationship where the protagonist is totally dominated and physically abused by the stepsister. Do that, and I'll give this game a very high rating.
No, same problem. The window size is right now, and a screen comes up with two buttons saying "Start Game" and "Change Resolution." I clicked on both buttons over and over again, but nothing happened. Then I just started clicking around the screen randomly, and it looks like it started. There was Stacy again, with two buttons at the bottom, "Next" and "Back," and I click them both over and over again, but nothing happens. Nor when I click anywhere else.
Then, to add insult to injury, I reduce the window size in the browser, and when I maximize it again, it's back to being way too big.
The first problem I had was that it was too big for my computer screen. I got that fixed (don't ask me how), but then the problem was, I couldn't advance the screen. There's "Stacy" saying something, so I click the button that says "Next," over and over again, but nothing happens. Must be a glitch of some sort.
Ugh, gross. There's not much I like more than a good futa-on-male game, but do we have to bring incest into it? I mean, I thought this game would be about getting sexually harassed and broken in by sexy futa classmates and teachers in a school setting, but it turns out it's just about getting banged by your mother. You were on such a good track, but you went completely off the rails. What happened? Call me old fashioned, but I believe a guy should have to leave the house to get laid! This Arkansas shit makes me sick.
And why do you call a vagina "sex?" There are many different words you can use for "her vagina." You can say "her pussy," "her beaver," "her muff," "her coochie," "her snizz," "her hoo-hoo," "her baby cannon," "her meat curtains," "her batcave," etc., etc. But "her sex?" No. That means something different.