Good art, but there are no choices. It's completely kinetic. And the poor grammar really ruins the experience...
Banjorune
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Just finished version 0.3. It's... interesting. Not nearly enough interracial-cuckolding-themed games out there, so it's always good to see a new one... Not enough choices, though. It feels way too "kinetic" (if that's the right term). And why were the bull character's eyes covered? And his skin tone should be darker. And the art in general isn't bad, but it's not great either. I prefer 3D art. Nothing wrong with the way it is, but there's room for improvement... But that's all I'm going to say right now. I know it's still early, and I want to keep an open mind. I'll be keeping an eye on this game. Thank you.
I can't remember any specifics because I already deleted the game from my hard drive, but I like a lot of the things the succubus said. FinDom is a very niche fetish that not many enjoy, but I do, and I appreciate any game that contains that aspect. And I'm not saying your art isn't cute, and it would probably work great for a comic strip or a kids' cartoon, but it's just not sexy. It doesn't make me want to jerk off the way a really well-done 3D render does. Look at my DeviantArt page (same username), both my own images and the ones I've favorited. You'll see what I'm talking about... But I can imagine a lot more FemDom stuff happening in this context. Like I said previously, scenes that involve bondage and discipline, humiliation, cuckolding, chastity, feminization/sissification, pegging/forced bi... Heck, the only limit is your own imagination. I mean, if nothing else, chastity has to be involved, because she made a big deal about him not whacking it between their handjob sessions, so you HAVE TO include chastity at some point, right?
OK, I really like the premise of this game, and I think it has potential, but the execution is highly flawed.
First of all, the Unity engine is bad. Unity doesn't even allow you to scroll the text backwards if you accidentally advance it too early, and saving your game is weird. You should use Renpy instead. Renpy doesn't have those problems. I gave up on the game when I attempted to save, failed, and lost about 14 days of progress. If this was a Renpy game, I wouldn't have had that problem. But anyway...
Second, the art isn't very good. The succubus character isn't even sexy. I love the idea of the financial domination inherent in this game, but a financial dominatrix has to be, you know, sexy, or else it just doesn't work. And while 2D art can be sexy, it is possible, it would be much better if you just used realistic 3D renders.
Thirdly, the handjob interface is just weird. It's not very clear what you're supposed to do or how. I would either make that a lot more clear or just completely reimagine how those scenes play out.
Fourthly, there just aren't enough things to do. If you want to make 90+ percent of the game in this single room, that's fine, but you should make more things happen in the room. More interactions with the female character, more FemDom scenes, more bondage and discipline, more humiliation, more cuckolding, lots of options. Not just "we went to the park," "we saw a movie," etc. Will that stuff be coming in future updates? If not, I can help you with some ideas...
But anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this game, because the premise and some of the writing is really good, and there just aren't enough games that focus on FinDom. Thank you.
I really like this game! Here's what I don't like about this game: Too much tell, not enough show. Like, there's a bunch of sex scenes, but they're all done Greek Chorus style. What I mean is, it just shows a picture of the person you're having sex with, fully clothed, and then describes the scene with words on the screen. You should make ART depicting the sex that you're writing words about, don't just show us the words about it. Because we want to see it, not just read about it. It doesn't have to be animated, still images are fine, but the images have to show, you know, sex, not just a woman standing there fully clothed. If you just did that, I think this game would be a 10/10. As it is now, I'd say 7/10, 7.5/10 if I'm being generous.
Really great game, it just seems like this is an origin story. Not the real story, but, like, the prequel to the real story. What I'm saying is, it's good, but it felt like it ended right before it was going to get REALLY good! I got the servant ending my first time through, and I do like that ending the best, but the game ended before I could actually BE the servant! See what I'm saying? It's like it ended just as the good part was about to begin!
And I LOVED the Amazon, but I wasn't a big fan of the partner girl. I was hoping there would be an ending where I could lose the partner girl along the way, give up on adventuring, go back home with the Amazon and just be her housewife. That's the ending I was REALLY hoping for. But no such luck. Disappointing...
Anyway, good game overall, but I think "Slave U" is your real magnum opus. That game is absolutely incredible. One of the best I've ever played. Is that ever going to get finished?
Thank you.