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Just finished version 0.3. It's... interesting. Not nearly enough interracial-cuckolding-themed games out there, so it's always good to see a new one... Not enough choices, though. It feels way too "kinetic" (if that's the right term). And why were the bull character's eyes covered? And his skin tone should be darker. And the art in general isn't bad, but it's not great either. I prefer 3D art. Nothing wrong with the way it is, but there's room for improvement... But that's all I'm going to say right now. I know it's still early, and I want to keep an open mind. I'll be keeping an eye on this game. Thank you.

I can't remember any specifics because I already deleted the game from my hard drive, but I like a lot of the things the succubus said. FinDom is a very niche fetish that not many enjoy, but I do, and I appreciate any game that contains that aspect. And I'm not saying your art isn't cute, and it would probably work great for a comic strip or a kids' cartoon, but it's just not sexy. It doesn't make me want to jerk off the way a really well-done 3D render does. Look at my DeviantArt page (same username), both my own images and the ones I've favorited. You'll see what I'm talking about... But I can imagine a lot more FemDom stuff happening in this context. Like I said previously, scenes that involve bondage and discipline, humiliation, cuckolding, chastity, feminization/sissification, pegging/forced bi... Heck, the only limit is your own imagination. I mean, if nothing else, chastity has to be involved, because she made a big deal about him not whacking it between their handjob sessions, so you HAVE TO include chastity at some point, right?

I'm not a foot fetishist, but I thoroughly enjoyed this demo. I'm more attracted to the boss's dominant attitude in general though, and less by her feet. I will be keeping an eye on this one. Will other fetishes be included in future updates?

OK, so, I played it... Is it all just all texting on a phone? That's kind of lame. That's like watching someone watch TV on TV! I mean, you could do that, but why, when there's so much more you can do in the medium of television...

OK, I really like the premise of this game, and I think it has potential, but the execution is highly flawed.

First of all, the Unity engine is bad. Unity doesn't even allow you to scroll the text backwards if you accidentally advance it too early, and saving your game is weird. You should use Renpy instead. Renpy doesn't have those problems. I gave up on the game when I attempted to save, failed, and lost about 14 days of progress. If this was a Renpy game, I wouldn't have had that problem. But anyway...

Second, the art isn't very good. The succubus character isn't even sexy. I love the idea of the financial domination inherent in this game, but a financial dominatrix has to be, you know, sexy, or else it just doesn't work. And while 2D art can be sexy, it is possible, it would be much better if you just used realistic 3D renders.

Thirdly, the handjob interface is just weird. It's not very clear what you're supposed to do or how. I would either make that a lot more clear or just completely reimagine how those scenes play out.

Fourthly, there just aren't enough things to do. If you want to make 90+ percent of the game in this single room, that's fine, but you should make more things happen in the room. More interactions with the female character, more FemDom scenes, more bondage and discipline, more humiliation, more cuckolding, lots of options. Not just "we went to the park," "we saw a movie," etc. Will that stuff be coming in future updates? If not, I can help you with some ideas...

But anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this game, because the premise and some of the writing is really good, and there just aren't enough games that focus on FinDom. Thank you.

No. This hits too close to home. I play these games to escape reality, not get it thrown in my face. Sorry.

Literally everything I click, it says, "An exception has occurred." I go rollback, click again, it says it again. I click ignore, it just goes to another screen saying "An exception has occurred." No progress can be made.

Too confusing. Too many moving parts. Too hard to figure out what you're supposed to do.

I really like this game! Here's what I don't like about this game: Too much tell, not enough show. Like, there's a bunch of sex scenes, but they're all done Greek Chorus style. What I mean is, it just shows a picture of the person you're having sex with, fully clothed, and then describes the scene with words on the screen. You should make ART depicting the sex that you're writing words about, don't just show us the words about it. Because we want to see it, not just read about it. It doesn't have to be animated, still images are fine, but the images have to show, you know, sex, not just a woman standing there fully clothed. If you just did that, I think this game would be a 10/10. As it is now, I'd say 7/10, 7.5/10 if I'm being generous.

I'd give anything to meet a woman like Lucy in real life.

There's no way to turn off the music? That's unfortunate.

No female domination?

Just an FYI. WHen I tried to download, a warning came up that said:

WARNING: This Page Has Been Quarantined

Our system has flagged this page for additional review due to potential suspicious behavior from the page owner.

So... you might want to do something about that...

I'm sure this is great, but when are you going to finish Slave U? I really loved that game.

Wow. You truly are an asshole. All right, then. Blocked.

I really love this game! I wouldn't be surprised if it ends up being my all-time favorite... But what about FemDom City? Are you ever going to finish that one?

You didn't actually read my comment, did you?

No description at all... So what's this game about?

Is there incest in this game?

Is there FemDom in this game?

Really great game, it just seems like this is an origin story. Not the real story, but, like, the prequel to the real story. What I'm saying is, it's good, but it felt like it ended right before it was going to get REALLY good! I got the servant ending my first time through, and I do like that ending the best, but the game ended before I could actually BE the servant! See what I'm saying? It's like it ended just as the good part was about to begin!

And I LOVED the Amazon, but I wasn't a big fan of the partner girl. I was hoping there would be an ending where I could lose the partner girl along the way, give up on adventuring, go back home with the Amazon and just be her housewife. That's the ending I was REALLY hoping for. But no such luck. Disappointing...

Anyway, good game overall, but I think "Slave U" is your real magnum opus. That game is absolutely incredible. One of the best I've ever played. Is that ever going to get finished?

Thank you.

Cool. Keep up the great work.

I finished the whole thing, all choices, all endings. (SPOILER ALERT.)

It's one of the best games I've ever played. Damn near perfect. I do think it would have been better if Stan had been a black guy, but I know that would have required a lot of changes to the whole second part of the story, seeing as how he works with skinhead bikers and all. But still, it seems like the perfect role for a black man, and the fact that he isn't seems like a wasted opportunity.

Other than that, I just wish that, on the Resistance route, there would have been an ending where Maya decides to Stay with Stan and/or Stan gets the upper hand and takes out Jennifer and John. Because I think Stan and Maya are a super-hot couple, much hotter than Stan and Jennifer, and I would have liked to see more possibilities where Stan and Maya end up together. The idea of Maya willfully betraying Jennifer for Stan in the end is super hot, but no such ending exists. Another wasted opportunity.

So, do you have a sequel in mind? If you choose not to execute Stan in the end on the Resistance route, that should come back to haunt the Turner family in the future, don't you think?

Anyway, thank you. Excellent job. And I look forward to more great things for you in the future! :)

Stan should have been a black guy.

Oh, geez. I'm sorry to hear that. I hope you can get that cleared up. It is a really good game. One of the best I've ever played. I've been playing it and haven't had any virus problems yet, so I'm sure it's fine. Thank you.

I clicked on "Single File Download" for Windows. It gave me the warning message...

I will throw caution to the wind and download from here anyway. What the fuck am I paying McAfee $150 a year for anyway? Wish me luck...

I just remembered. I downloaded it from F95zone because, when I clicked on the link to download it here, a warning message came up saying, "WARNING: This Page Has Been Quarantined. Our system has flagged this page for additional review due to potential suspicious behavior from the page owner." So I thought it best to steer clear of downloading it here. Downloading from F95 gave no such warning. And it says v1.0 there too, so it should be the same thing.

The last was "Enter the tournament" or "Refuse him." And the second to last was "Look for a trail to Maya at the club" or "Join Brock and Samantha."

And there's another dead end after getting the information about Maya and Autumn's whereabouts from Ralph after banging him. He calls the next morning, John teaches Jennifer how to shoot, she goes back to her hotel room and thinks, "(Even if the price I paid for that information was... high.)" Then fade to black, next screen, "Thanks for playing." Very awkward place to end.

I thought this was a complete game! John entered the tournament at the fight club, and then it just ended. I guess he lost the tournament? It would have been nice to actually see that happen. Not just "If he can win this, we might have a real chance at bringing Maya back..." and then just fade to black and "Thanks for playing!" What a let-down! And it was such an awesome storygame leading up to that...

Huh?

This is fantastic! I love this game! So great to see a new update!

...So, when are you going to finish FemDom City?

I think just restarting the computer fixed the problem, but I'm still wary...

Fantastic demo! I can hardly wait to see more chapters! Keep up the great work!

Happy to help!

This is super sexy. I'm enthusiastic to see more. I just hope that, in future updates, there are actual choices that lead to different paths and endings and not just one linear kinetic story. That would be disappointing.

I can't figure out how to get passed the red tentacles in the ice dungeon.

I see you've published a new game... But I liked this game! Are you ever going to finish it?

I saw this game on F95 and played it a few months ago. I liked it, but it was too short and too kinetic. More like a demo/preview of what could become a really great game rather than a game itself. Is there more content now, or is it the same as it was last November?

Thanks.

You've got a good concept here, I wouldn't be commenting if I didn't like it, but there's definitely room for improvement...

First of all, why the name "Dara?" The fact that it ends with an "a" makes it sound like a girl's name. I thought "Dara" would be a female before his character was introduced. Getting cucked by a guy with a girl's name... doesn't really work.

And Dara should be... oh, how should I put this... BLACK. Even as pathetic as the protagonist is, the idea of getting cucked by an upper-class teenage white boy is kind of laughable. Upper-class white guys are the kind of guys who GET cucked, not the kind of guys who CUCK. Just saying...

And a technical note, I don't know what program you used to create the game, but it's a poor substitute for Renpy. Not being able to save the game when I please or roll back or fast forward through text is quite frustrating.

Too little content as yet to judge, but it looks promising. I'm looking forward to future updates.

What the fuck are you talking about? What does that even mean? You're really bad at this, aren't you?