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The story was good... Short, but good. The art is quite poor, though. I mean, it's a porn game. The art is supposed to be sexy, not... this. I hope future parts have better art.

I got until the part where she started explaining this complicated-ass card game. Yeah... no. That's like doing homework. No thanks.

OK... Interesting start. I'm not a big fan of turn-based combat, but it's better than the way the combat is in RPGM... Is there going to be FemDom in this game?

I'm generally not into fantasy-setting games, but there are a few I've enjoyed. And the art looks spectacular. But before I download, please tell me, what engine did you use? Ren'Py, or something else?

Thank you. I will keep an eye out for future updates.

Do what you want to do, but I just hope you understand my frustration. I was actually into it before it just came to a grinding halt.

I just started playing, so please cut me some slack if I'm asking a stupid question, but what... um... what the object of this game? What am I supposed to do here? Is there some mystery to solve or some McMuffin to find? I don't get it, what am I supposed to do?

Thank you.

Good god, I just fucking HATE RPG Maker games! I couldn't get past the past where I'm supposed to clean up the "snail trail," but I just don't have that good of hand-eye coordination. I shouldn't have to do shit like that in a porn game! It's not a fucking arcade game, stop trying to make it one! It should be just read a story and make choices, not hit a button at the right time or fail to advance the story! And it's sad, because I was really liking the story and thought this was one I could really enjoy. But it's too fucking frustrating, I can't go on. AT LEAST there should be a way to skip these arcade-game elements if you're no good at them.

I hope you feel better soon. This community is a poorer place without you...

It's not a good joke, and it's the WRONG FUCKING PLACE for one!

I'll check it out. I wish you good luck with it at any rate.

The art is bad, there's not enough choices and, like all RPGM games, there's just too much walking around looking for shit and not enough plot development.

I feel that way because I'm a person who believes in science, progress and reason, not ancient superstitions. Too bad, because I really liked the earlier version of this game. I guess I misjudged you. Buh-bye.

"Christian dating sim?" You've got to be fucking kidding me, right?

So this is done? Like, a completed game?

If so, great! But then why does it say "0.9.5" instead of "1.0?"

I hate to admit it, but this was actually kind of cute. I don't like the fact that there were no choices, and I've always thought futa-on-futa is kind of redundant, but it was short-and-sweet enough for that not to bother me too much. It was a nice way to kill 10 minutes.

Cute little game. The part where she came up gasping for air while giving the blowey was funny, seeing as how vampires don't have to breathe, but whatever. This game is a fun way to kill five minutes...

Just finished version 0.3. It's... interesting. Not nearly enough interracial-cuckolding-themed games out there, so it's always good to see a new one... Not enough choices, though. It feels way too "kinetic" (if that's the right term). And why were the bull character's eyes covered? And his skin tone should be darker. And the art in general isn't bad, but it's not great either. I prefer 3D art. Nothing wrong with the way it is, but there's room for improvement... But that's all I'm going to say right now. I know it's still early, and I want to keep an open mind. I'll be keeping an eye on this game. Thank you.

I can't remember any specifics because I already deleted the game from my hard drive, but I like a lot of the things the succubus said. FinDom is a very niche fetish that not many enjoy, but I do, and I appreciate any game that contains that aspect. And I'm not saying your art isn't cute, and it would probably work great for a comic strip or a kids' cartoon, but it's just not sexy. It doesn't make me want to jerk off the way a really well-done 3D render does. Look at my DeviantArt page (same username), both my own images and the ones I've favorited. You'll see what I'm talking about... But I can imagine a lot more FemDom stuff happening in this context. Like I said previously, scenes that involve bondage and discipline, humiliation, cuckolding, chastity, feminization/sissification, pegging/forced bi... Heck, the only limit is your own imagination. I mean, if nothing else, chastity has to be involved, because she made a big deal about him not whacking it between their handjob sessions, so you HAVE TO include chastity at some point, right?

I'm not a foot fetishist, but I thoroughly enjoyed this demo. I'm more attracted to the boss's dominant attitude in general though, and less by her feet. I will be keeping an eye on this one. Will other fetishes be included in future updates?

OK, so, I played it... Is it all just all texting on a phone? That's kind of lame. That's like watching someone watch TV on TV! I mean, you could do that, but why, when there's so much more you can do in the medium of television...

OK, I really like the premise of this game, and I think it has potential, but the execution is highly flawed.

First of all, the Unity engine is bad. Unity doesn't even allow you to scroll the text backwards if you accidentally advance it too early, and saving your game is weird. You should use Renpy instead. Renpy doesn't have those problems. I gave up on the game when I attempted to save, failed, and lost about 14 days of progress. If this was a Renpy game, I wouldn't have had that problem. But anyway...

Second, the art isn't very good. The succubus character isn't even sexy. I love the idea of the financial domination inherent in this game, but a financial dominatrix has to be, you know, sexy, or else it just doesn't work. And while 2D art can be sexy, it is possible, it would be much better if you just used realistic 3D renders.

Thirdly, the handjob interface is just weird. It's not very clear what you're supposed to do or how. I would either make that a lot more clear or just completely reimagine how those scenes play out.

Fourthly, there just aren't enough things to do. If you want to make 90+ percent of the game in this single room, that's fine, but you should make more things happen in the room. More interactions with the female character, more FemDom scenes, more bondage and discipline, more humiliation, more cuckolding, lots of options. Not just "we went to the park," "we saw a movie," etc. Will that stuff be coming in future updates? If not, I can help you with some ideas...

But anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this game, because the premise and some of the writing is really good, and there just aren't enough games that focus on FinDom. Thank you.

No. This hits too close to home. I play these games to escape reality, not get it thrown in my face. Sorry.

Literally everything I click, it says, "An exception has occurred." I go rollback, click again, it says it again. I click ignore, it just goes to another screen saying "An exception has occurred." No progress can be made.

Too confusing. Too many moving parts. Too hard to figure out what you're supposed to do.

I really like this game! Here's what I don't like about this game: Too much tell, not enough show. Like, there's a bunch of sex scenes, but they're all done Greek Chorus style. What I mean is, it just shows a picture of the person you're having sex with, fully clothed, and then describes the scene with words on the screen. You should make ART depicting the sex that you're writing words about, don't just show us the words about it. Because we want to see it, not just read about it. It doesn't have to be animated, still images are fine, but the images have to show, you know, sex, not just a woman standing there fully clothed. If you just did that, I think this game would be a 10/10. As it is now, I'd say 7/10, 7.5/10 if I'm being generous.

I'd give anything to meet a woman like Lucy in real life.

There's no way to turn off the music? That's unfortunate.

Just an FYI. WHen I tried to download, a warning came up that said:

WARNING: This Page Has Been Quarantined

Our system has flagged this page for additional review due to potential suspicious behavior from the page owner.

So... you might want to do something about that...

I'm sure this is great, but when are you going to finish Slave U? I really loved that game.

Wow. You truly are an asshole. All right, then. Blocked.

I really love this game! I wouldn't be surprised if it ends up being my all-time favorite... But what about FemDom City? Are you ever going to finish that one?

You didn't actually read my comment, did you?

No description at all... So what's this game about?

Is there incest in this game?

Is there FemDom in this game?

Really great game, it just seems like this is an origin story. Not the real story, but, like, the prequel to the real story. What I'm saying is, it's good, but it felt like it ended right before it was going to get REALLY good! I got the servant ending my first time through, and I do like that ending the best, but the game ended before I could actually BE the servant! See what I'm saying? It's like it ended just as the good part was about to begin!

And I LOVED the Amazon, but I wasn't a big fan of the partner girl. I was hoping there would be an ending where I could lose the partner girl along the way, give up on adventuring, go back home with the Amazon and just be her housewife. That's the ending I was REALLY hoping for. But no such luck. Disappointing...

Anyway, good game overall, but I think "Slave U" is your real magnum opus. That game is absolutely incredible. One of the best I've ever played. Is that ever going to get finished?

Thank you.

Cool. Keep up the great work.

I finished the whole thing, all choices, all endings. (SPOILER ALERT.)

It's one of the best games I've ever played. Damn near perfect. I do think it would have been better if Stan had been a black guy, but I know that would have required a lot of changes to the whole second part of the story, seeing as how he works with skinhead bikers and all. But still, it seems like the perfect role for a black man, and the fact that he isn't seems like a wasted opportunity.

Other than that, I just wish that, on the Resistance route, there would have been an ending where Maya decides to Stay with Stan and/or Stan gets the upper hand and takes out Jennifer and John. Because I think Stan and Maya are a super-hot couple, much hotter than Stan and Jennifer, and I would have liked to see more possibilities where Stan and Maya end up together. The idea of Maya willfully betraying Jennifer for Stan in the end is super hot, but no such ending exists. Another wasted opportunity.

So, do you have a sequel in mind? If you choose not to execute Stan in the end on the Resistance route, that should come back to haunt the Turner family in the future, don't you think?

Anyway, thank you. Excellent job. And I look forward to more great things for you in the future! :)

Stan should have been a black guy.