Now this "game"(?) probably won't have a universal appeal. But I've got to say, this is something that really appeals to me. It is hard to judge and criticise, because I'm not even sure I have a position to give feedback on here. We're on a project that feels truly personal. The creator sharing thoughts, from a human to another through an interactive medium.
I think the video game as an art medium is often seen as lesser, given that it is usually first and for all a product that needs to be sold, that it needs to be engaging and fulfil some kind of entertainment to the player. And that's why I love the approach taken here.
Now what if the point was to have such experience sold to a larger public? Then the feedback I would give would be to keep it simple like here, but the addition of small things, like some music and a bit of sound design could highten a lot the experience. And I think the sharing of thoughts could go even further. What a great feeling it is to read some lines from a random human, that maybe lives on another continent, that I probably will never meet, with whom I might actually have very different beliefs and interests, and yet, somehow, we still share some train of thoughts. That even in this huge world with so many beings, we can still find something to relate to each other, in the simplest to the grander aspects of who we are.
Anyways, a big comment for a game with lots of text. I'll just finish by saying I enjoyed the art, and that key art for the game is especially striking, which is funny when you see how simple it is. The colors are just so efficient, and I can't help but think of Goodnight Punpun when I see the character, which is even more fitting here for the people familiar with that series of books.