I'm glad you liked it! I'm already working on the rest of the cast to start making banners and stuff, and to move the story forward obviously
Noted! Someone revised the script for me after I posted the demo, English is not my first language so I appreciate the feedback n_n
As for Kate's age, she is 20, just two years ahead of the MC, I'm not sure what could I do about that, but I'm open to suggestions, so far I only drew them as I wanted them to look like xD