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Was worth the <30min playthrough. Would be curious to see how it comes along.

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“Exited” should probably be “excited” I assumed Kate was 18 and then saw that she looks like she’s in her mid-20’s, so that was a trip to get my head around.

ArcaneNSFW311 days ago(+2)

I'm glad you liked it! I'm already working on the rest of the cast to start making banners and stuff, and to move the story forward obviously

Noted! Someone revised the script for me after I posted the demo, English is not my first language so I appreciate the feedback n_n

As for Kate's age, she is 20, just two years ahead of the MC, I'm not sure what could I do about that, but I'm open to suggestions, so far I only drew them as I wanted them to look like xD

yarow12311 days ago(+1)

You good. I’m used to seeing work by people who aren’t fully immersed in English, so it was whatevs tbh.

I wouldn’t sweat her visual age too much since it’s not hard to get past. Chalk it up to genetics and carry on.

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