Oh yeah, I really like his nice look at the beginning and ofc the creepiness of the gaze and what he’s saying/doing comes in later, it’s refreshing that he looks so nice 😄 shay-ki totally nailed it 💙
Thank you for all your suggestions as well, esp with the internal thoughts and the romance, it helped challenge me to push the script more and my editors loved the juicier emotional bits! 💕