This was an excellent adventure and worthy winner for this competition. The writing is good and the scenario tightly focused so that the player is rarely in any doubt what they need to do next to keep exploring. The protagonist Ian, a rebellious teenager, does have to break some rules along the way to solve the mystery which seems entirely in keeping with his personality. Beginners may need the odd hint to solve the puzzles. The hint system (which worked around the geography of the school) was excellent and helped me to get back on track when I occasionally got stuck for a few minutes. I liked the NPCs too who had a little personality each but also provided a clear function in the game to move the puzzles forward. I won't say anything more for fear of spoilers, but suffice to say that this is a school with some hidden learning pathways! Congratulations to the author.