I love the art, design, and premise -- and thank you for making it free! The thing i'd like to give feedback on (please don't take it as criticism!) is that i'm struggling to read the body text in that font as it's quite condensed and all-caps.
Such a lovely little game, i can totally see this being played solo, just playing out a little fairy-tale story as both narrator and merfolk. Would love to see more from you!