First: I bought this game when 0.16 first came out, and I love it as much now, as I did then. Maybe more. The characters are deeply human, even if they're... not. I adore the reworks you've given to the android arc, and thank you, SO MUCH, for creating a game with BDSM, that is genuinely kind and loving. You are doing fantastic work, and I hope you are able to continue.
I'm betting this was fixed in the latest build, but I played through on 0.17.0, so here goes.
I prioritized making money, before the story, so I ignored the prompts, until I could get the bar fully completed. This resulted in QUITE a few "active stories", with all characters having an exclamation mark. Several scenes were able to be done out of order with scenes that belonged to another character (the one that sticks in my mind the most was Autumn's scene where MC is peeking on her trying out lingerie, which was able to be triggered before Lin and crew went to the island, but had a conversation with Sylvia talking about the experience). You might want to refine the lockouts a bit, and only show exclamation points for the "next in line" story scene.
also, Vanessa's entire story arc somehow never got triggered, until after I loaded a mod, and I got a message saying something borked, do I want to start her story? Obviously yes, but that was a bit... disappointing, knowing where some of those scenes SHOULD have been, in the whole story line.
All told, it was a great second experience, but I think I'll wait for the 0.18.2 version to come out, before I play through again.