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I really like the demo and concept! The characters are so fun, the soundtrack is well-selected, and the art is phenomenal.

One thing I noticed, however, is that the tense of the narration would change constantly. Mission reports, presumably written in past tense, often switch to present in the middle of a sentence. The narration itself, presumably written in present tense, often switches back to past. It's sort of a pet peeve of mine, but the game was very compelling nonetheless. I can't wait for the full release!

Thank you very much for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed the demo.

Ah, the writing tense in the narration is something we tried to fix but alas, there are probably still spots that we have overlooked. We will try our best to polish it more for the end product! :D