Played through the demo and your writing is just delightful! I love how relatable and interesting the MC is, and the many non-romanceable characters have a depth that make the setting feel very alive.
I also really love the watercolour artstyle, in particular the way colours seem to blend together at points.
I did notice a few small errors in the writing that I'm sure an editor could easily fish out.
The interactions between our two love interests were also very enjoyable to watch, though I don't feel like I know either of them well enough yet to really pick a favourite. Edel appeals to me a bit more so far, but I'm just interested to see where the story goes in general.
I have no idea why I got the "good" ending in the end vs. a bad ending first time around but I guess it's part of the fun hehe