Also, going through Kano now, Citrine (the witch, obvious but it hurts not to specify) constantly says neither in the place of either, which doesn't seem to fit their character. Their thoughts, at least, are very well read, as is prominent in their descriptions of their partners during the act. While of course I am not a writer I do find this to break immersion at least for me. (Otherwise though love the game is great love it)
PS: Can you add an option to mute hunt music? I genuinely find it too distracting because of how good it is and have to mute my PC which is a hassle because my keyboard doesn't have a mute option