Since I don't know how to read any of the dialogue here and that seems like an important part, I'll abstain from rating. But it looks like a good amount of effort was put into making a story here and I'm glad to see that! I hope you had fun.
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Oh that's a good idea! Since this is solely about accessibility of people playing your game, I will allow you to update your download with an English translation at any point if you finish it. Just make sure that you don't make any other changes to the game/story itself whatsoever or add any content. If you do want to make a more improved game, upload it after the voting period when the results are announced so it's fair to the other contestants. Good luck!