This was a very fun little VN! The art style was really cute, and the use of animations in some of the CGs really helped bring it to life. I can tell a lot of care was put into the sound effects too, and the music was all well-fitting.
This is very polished for a first release; I think you did a great job with it!
Since the VN is p short, it was also fun going through it multiple times to discover all of the different endings!