Please report any inconsistencies you find, it's the only way I can fix them.
Due to the bar cost, it should not be possible to buy it within the first week unless you cheat. It is also never a liability. Moon going bowling has nothing to do with her relationship with you. Same with any other character that appears there.
Kate's story timing does need adjustment, I've heard that a lot. Though I'm not sure how it should be adjusted at this point.
In the bowling event (Part of Kali story) Moon already knows the MC name (Which she doesn't learns until after the 2nd bar event (After the training is over, where the MC introduces himself as Mr. Moon), there is also the possibility of her blowing the MC (Which then goes into conflict with the event where she invites the MC to her apartment and end ups blowing him for the first time).
What i mean about the bar is making it a part of the hotel (Not a buyable upgrade, but a free one) after one week or so of gameplay, that way the MC will at least know Moon before events involving her that make no sense with not meeting her (Pixel/MC taking Ally to the park, where they meet Moon) and the whole Kali thing.
