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Very fun and polished too! If you are taking suggestions, I have some.

1. I'd like to be able to save my progress as a base64 string or something. The game seems to only save to cookies? but I am in incognito mode so I won't retain those. I don't want to repeat the beginning so I might not play again if I accidentally close this window, but I plan to keep this window open for a few days and make more progress.

2. I'd prefer to have choices during the first s*x scene. Sometimes the option I want to pick is not available even though it is simpler than the alternative that is available. Like, I cannot give her what she is asking for and must choose to tease. There could be an option to skip teasing like she wants me to.

3. In my first interaction with the queen, what is "play cortes"? is it untranslated from another language? I pressed it because I had to know what it was, and it was the threat of military force. I never would have threatened the villagers on purpose.

4. Tara is my favorite character. The date with her was very good. It could have used more calming music near the end. slower and without percussion. Also, I would really prefer an option to simply sleep together on the first night and put off our first s*x to the second night. Sleeping together would be like a calming reward to getting the dinner date correct, and it also fits well with her personality. as shy as she is, I should be able to take it slow with her.

5. near the end of the first s*x with Tara, I'd like an intentionally gentle story option, so that if I choose it, it avoids all mention of "ruining her", because I would not be rough.

6. I would like more time with Tara. When I went back to her front door at night for the second night in a row, I was surprised that she was no longer offering for me to sleep with her (sparkles gone from front door, could not go inside). Based on how much she liked me, I hoped the offer would be permanent. That would be cute, and also convenient because of her proximity to the water make it faster to sleep to reset fishing. Maybe I'm missing the point of the game, though, because it's not about settling down with someone?

Anyway, if you add any 1 panel of art to the game, I'd like to see the main character and Tara cuddle in bed and sleep.

7. in the line "Lilu: I misbehaved so badly that you barely ripped my tail off.", the word "barely" should be replaced with "nearly" or "almost", because her tail was not ripped off all the way. If her tail was "barely" ripped off, it would be gone.

8. The game is big and fun, but to me the first 5 minutes gave an impression that it would be smaller and exposition-heavy. I thought Judy was only going to waste time. Maybe it would be good to have a few other things to do before doing all of that talking with Judy. Maybe if my bag with the communicator in it were further away from my landing site, I could pick up other things on the way there like flowers for later. And then I would have an idea of what gameplay could be like before I had to listen to judy.

This is just my personal preference maybe, but I don't like listening to Judy, at least not until she gets helpful with relationship advice for me and Tara.

9. to speed some things up, I'd like to skip a line said by a character before they are totally done saying it. Also, at the cellar where Naira built her workshop, at the ground level entrance to it, it always asks whether you're sure you want to go down there, but it should maybe only ask the first time.

Thank you for creating this, it is quite good!

Thank you, feedback and useful advices are always appreciated.

1 Well, it’s more about RPGMaker engine, I’m not sure we even can change it.
2 The cellar scene with Naira was completely remastered in ep 8, choices are different. The cellar location too, and animations, and traps - everything in fact.
3 Cortes, the Spanish asshole who conquered South America. The situation is pretty similar to the historical one, he the same threatened them and fooled when went to the local leader. 
4 Both dates got new music in ep 8.
5 I tried to make her scene gentle. We’ll remaster it in the future, I’ll change the text too. 
6 It’s the end of content so far, we’ll make the lines after the date, and new quest in ep 9. Talking of sleep, I guess girls won’t offer the regular option to sleep in their homes, instead John will call them to live in his home as their relationship gets stronger, after the second date.
7 I’ll edit it in the ep 9 too. 
8 Maybe, we’ll remaster the whole intro part too. Currently we’re open for ideas what it could be like. 
9 Entrance phrase fixed and fast-skip added in ep 8.