Hi, AxalKay! Thank you for taking the time to play the demo of my game and providing your feedback. I appreciate your honest thoughts and opinions on the writing aspect, as I believe constructive criticism is valuable for our growth and improvement. I also appreciate your recommendation of the video, I'll definitely watch it. If you have any further suggestions or if there's anything else you'd like to share, please feel free to reach out. I'm always open to hearing from my players.