I recently released my first visual novel game - Shadow Pursuit, but have no feedback for now.
To get some review i made Demo version to check the gameplay.
Folks, please try the demo and leave your feedback, i'll be very appreciate ;)
Hello. I played the demo for your game. The writing is 3/10. 1$ is not an unreasonable price for a VN. I have no interest on playing the rest of the game. This guys wife may die. Who is he? Who is his wife? Why should I care? The closer look recently made a video about The Mandalorian I think you should watch. It is titled when good shows go bad. Just keep practicing.
Hi, AxalKay! Thank you for taking the time to play the demo of my game and providing your feedback. I appreciate your honest thoughts and opinions on the writing aspect, as I believe constructive criticism is valuable for our growth and improvement. I also appreciate your recommendation of the video, I'll definitely watch it. If you have any further suggestions or if there's anything else you'd like to share, please feel free to reach out. I'm always open to hearing from my players.