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"Text-based adventure game" is certainly a title that describes the game at its core. :)

There are still a few typos. A little more punctuation would be great too. Some sentences are quite long and with long sentences it sometimes gets a bit harder to follow their meaning and so you sometimes have to re-read them, which could be avoided with a few commas or full stops. This is of course my personal preference and not necessarily that of other players/readers.

Nice introduction to a choose-your-own-adventure game. I especially like the option to just stay put at the beginning. That was a nice touch. You should definitely give textbased games another try in the future.

Thanks for playing my game and yes i agree there are lot of improvement need to be made and if i have time in the future i will give this kind of game another try.