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This was a story told extremely well. It feels so horrifically real - the mention of the grandfather's drinking, casual verbal abuse, the mother lashing out at the daughter later, comparing her to the father, her guilt, just everything. Every new scene, I felt a pit in my stomach dreading what was next. The characters are also very well written.

I'm glad that you chose a more "simple" art-style. It does its job well but still leaves out the gory details that a realistic art-style wouldn't have.

This kind of story requires some finesse and I think you managed it well. Good job!

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Thank you, that means a lot! I'm glad you dissected all the little details, that tends to be how I analyze texts and I think it informs how I make anything creative. I get pretty fussy about what small bits go in and which are too baggy or unnecessary.