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I second this. Giving Puppet a legit game purpose could be interesting. Her parts need to be expanded as there is little to her currently. The spying aspect in that one scene is interesting. Maybe voyeurism could be a part of her character as well? Also, would she ever find out that cum was used as lube? She did blow MC after all, so she could realize it is the same stuff afterwards. Perhaps she didn't notice it at first as it has been 10 years since she had sex, seeing how she was trapped. There is a chance she looks for MC and talks to him about it. Just to fill out the game more and make the place and its characters more interesting. It definitely would help if each of the animatronics had specific kinks too one could indulge in.

Also, now that I think about it, the pizza number quest is strange. Puppet has been trapped for 10 years and yet knows about night guards ordering pizza. Or maybe night guards ordered pizza 10 years ago, but then chances would be that the pizza place they used is out of business. Many things can happen in 10 years. That a number in in the dumpster is weird too. Why would the last night guard throw that number away? How is it still in the dumpster, seeing how the dumpster should get emptied regularly? It seems very contrived.

Now that I think about it, the pizzeria one works at it out of business too, so why are night guards hired for it? It would be a good thing to know about as I don't think it was explained in the intro. Is it currently not in use because of some circumstances and MC is only there to make sure no equipment is stolen? Is there a renovation planned that got delayed because of some circumstances? It is important that the story and lore is build.

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Definitely! I will work on the lore a lot more, right now the game is very early and its not that polished but I will work on it a lot!