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(3 edits) (+3)

It is an alright game.

There are several typos, in the intro as well, that should be fixed. When getting the microphone, it skips the text with Freddina about needing the microphone. Then you get your scene from her at 6 AM, the time jumps to 7 AM which then breaks the game if you want to end the shift, as in you try to end the shift and are then transported to the puppet meeting scene every time you press that button. Then there is also the problem of triggering the sex scene with Foxy, before the beer quest. The beer quest surprises the player by revealing her to be a futa, but that surprise feels wrong then there has already been a sex scene.

The cleaning spray quest does not seem to run. Or at least it seems that buying the spray before getting it causes problems that makes it impossible to run. More uncertain if that really is an issue or if I am doing something wrong.

I am a bit confused why the outside pizzeria pixel art in the intro looks so detailed. It seems like a completely different pixel artist. No offense meant to the other art. I am not sure if you are doing the art yourself or if you have an artist, though I would recommend improving the art as that would be a bigger draw for your game then, as you have a lot of competition.

Another thing to touch up upon is the game itself. It is fairly simple with some choices here and there, but overall it might be too simple. The interactions aren't as interesting as they could be. Maybe having some impactful choices could help or maybe try having some events that bring interest. Hearing a noise in the guard room is interesting and sparks curiosity. Perhaps that could be utilized among other things.

Story wise, maybe having more clear relationships, rivalries and the like between the animatronics could be interesting. The aggressive Foxy definitely was the most interesting out of the characters, though she could use more of a thorough line. Like seeing her demeanor change from threatening to aggressive, to annoyed. Having her maybe warm up and become more playfully harsh.

Like I said, the writing feels a bit jumbled, so you would do well to think about the characters, their connections and how it develops. This could also lead to scenes with just two animatronics or even a threesome.