Wow, what a great write-up! I really appreciate you taking the time to play!
I think you've got great points across the board. Some of them are things I've already been taking into consideration in the most current version (it's much more expanded than this original game jam idea) but others are things I wasn't thinking of before now. I'm going to add to them to my list as I keep developing out the expanded rulebook.
Thanks again for playing (and for writing up your thoughts)!