A great concept, well executed. Well done!
I did see the ending coming, but it still hit me. The music and voice acting really sold it. Leonie’s voice acting, in particular, was excellent throughout.
The writing was mostly solid, although there were some small grammatical errors. The art was also solid, and did what it needed to do.
I didn’t really see the point of being able to view each scene without the characters. In fact, I’m not sure why I needed to click on part of the text to make the scene appear in the first place. It could have just appeared when I clicked on the corresponding tab, or began the chapter. This didn’t lessen my enjoyment; it just seemed superfluous.
Overall, great job! Easy recommendation 😊
SPOILER WARNING!!!
My main criticism is that I wish more of the puzzles had involved the notes, as I was able to solve all but the party chapter simply by seeing which character appeared in every scene. If you ever decide to extend this game, I think the format could be used for some really clever deduction puzzles.