Is this planned as pay to win or how? There is name your own price, how does that work out, when the game is released. You push steam, but will it still be on itch, or only as a demo?
Online PvP are often pay to win and I found nothing indicating one way or the other how the game is planned. And I can't draw a conclusion from your other game, as this is not out of demo stage either.
This looks like I might want to play it. Though the PvP is a bit ... let's just say, to someone like me, a story mode would not hurt.
Also, do not listen to the haters. Your art is fine. Scantiliy clad fantasy heroines are a thing. Or will your muscled barbarian be covering his bulging abs, or will he be running around in a Conan like loin cloth? Assuming you include some male characters. You could also include the stereotypical dwarf hiding behind beard and tons of steel.
The complains I read are from kids playing at school (on school equipment no less), where they should not play games in the first place. Will you remove magic from the game, when christian fundamentalists complain? You should be aware that a lot of the freeloaders on itch are from countries with low income and high morals. You won't make any money from them, so do not let them shape your game. Looking like childs. Hah. Your characters are chibis. Their heads are as big as their torso. They are supposed to look cuddly and fit the sillyness of fighting with a banana inside a bagpack, that is bigger than a small house.