Concerning MNF right at the very beginning, there was going to be two choices, either an alternate route or the harem route. You only wrote the harem route with obvious options to not include everyone. I would suggest removing both of those option completely. It's a harem game and there is no other choice to made except to play it or not. Surprised by now you haven't removed those choice. There is no alternate route, except the choices in the harem route, which is the game itself.
Stick with HS1...